与英语四级作文要求相比，英语六级作文考试拿到高分的要求更高，提高英语写作能力十分重要。
Scores are undoubtedly important for students. So today when I saw the score, 96,on my Chinese test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed that mum would also be very happy and perhaps she would reward me.
分数对学生来说无疑很重要。所以今天，当我看到语文试卷上的96分时，我的'幸福无法用语言表达。我相信妈妈也会很高兴，也许她会奖励我。
As soon as I got home, I raised the test paper before mum and said proudly, "Mum, look at my score!" Out of my expectation,Mum said calmly, "Good, but I hope you can find out the reason why four points were taken away." Hearing the words, I stood in amazement at first. Then I understood Mum’s words and nodded with all my strength.
一回到家，我就把试卷举到妈妈面前，骄傲地说：“妈妈，看看我的分数！”出乎我的意料，妈妈平静地说：”很好，但我希望你能找出四分被拿走的原因。”听到这些话，我起初惊讶地站了起来。然后我听懂了妈妈的话，用尽全力点了点头。
Then Iunderstood that the most important thing that we get from examinations is not whether we have got high scores but whether we know what we have grasped and what we haven’t.
然后我明白了，我们从考试中得到的最重要的东西不是我们是否取得了高分，而是我们是否知道我们掌握了什么，没有掌握什么。
Now we often see young men smooking in public places .They think smooking is a pleasure . How silly they are !
现在我们经常看到年轻人在公共场所抽烟。他 他们真傻！
Reports show several millions of people die from smoking all over the world every year .Smoking all over the world evevry year .Smoking can cause a lot of illness.
报告显示，全世界每年有数百万人死于吸烟。全世界每年都吸烟。吸烟会引起很多疾病。
Smoking is also the way leading the youth from bad to worse . In order to get money for smoking,some students take away the money from their parentspockets.Some of them even steal money from others.
吸烟也是导致年轻人每况愈下的原因。为了得到抽烟的`钱，一些学生从父母的钱袋里拿走了钱。他们中的一些人甚至偷别人的钱。
As we all know , smookers cant go on with their work without cigarettets.And the more they smoke,the worse their health will be.
众所周知，抽烟的人没有香烟就不能继续工作。他们吸烟越多，健康状况就会越差。
Smoking is our dangerous enemy. Please give up smoking as soon as possible.
吸烟是我们危险的敌人。请尽快戒烟。
Last Thursday，we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating，climbing a mountain，and going to an amusement park. Finally，we decided to go mountain climbing.
上周四，我们开了一次班会，讨论去哪里春游。我们想出了几个选择，比如划船、爬山和去游乐园。最后，我们决定去爬山。
The next day，we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain，we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However，when we reached the top，we were shocked to see litter here and there，such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non—recycling bin respectively.
第二天，我们一大早就出发了。登山时，我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的景色。然而，当我们到达山顶时，我们震惊地看到到处都是垃圾，比如瓶子和香蕉皮。然后我们开始收集垃圾，并将垃圾分别放入附近的。回收站和非回收站。
We were tired but happy.
我们很累，但很开心。
There are four seasons in a year, and I hate winter the most. In my hometown, we don’t have heating system to get warmed, so indoor just as cold as outdoor. The icy wind is blowing on your face and you just feel like you would become a Popsicle.
一年四季，我最讨厌冬天。在我的家乡，我们没有供暖系统来取暖，所以室内和室外一样冷。冰冷的风吹在你的'脸上，你就像变成了一根冰棍。
Getting out of bed just become harder and harder as the temperature drops lower. What’s worse, when you try to write your homework, you just can’t feel your hands anymore because of the cold weather. I really envy the people who live in the north for they can stay inside to enjoy the heat, just like living in the spring. Oh, how I wish the winter can pass quickly!
随着气温的下降，起床变得越来越困难。更糟糕的是，当你试图写作业时，由于天气寒冷，你再也感觉不到你的手了。我真的很羡慕住在北方的人，因为他们可以呆在里面享受炎热，就像住在春天一样。哦，我多么希望冬天能快点过去！
Last night, I had an interesting dream. In the dream I accidentally got a magic pen with which I could write beautiful Chinese characters. Then I took part in a calligraphy competition. With the help of the pen I got the first place. I became famous soon and a lot of people came to beg me for some characters. I felt very proud of myself. But when I picked the pen up and wrote down a character, I found it very ugly. The pen no longer had magic. I was frightened into cold sweat. Seeing this, people understood what was happening. They all laughed at me and said that I was a cheat. I tried to find some place to hide but couldn’t find any.
昨晚，我做了一个有趣的梦。在梦中，我不小心得到了一支神奇的钢笔，我可以用它写漂亮的汉字。然后我参加了书法比赛。在钢笔的帮助下，我得了第一名。我很快就出名了，很多人来求我演一些角色。我为自己感到骄傲。但当我拿起笔写下一个字时，我发现它很难看。这支钢笔不再有魔力了。我吓出一身冷汗。看到这里，人们明白了发生了什么。他们都嘲笑我，说我是个骗子。我想找个地方藏起来，但找不到。
Then I was scared awoken. I know that in the world there is no magic pen. Only when I work hard can I write beautiful characters.
然后我被吓醒了。我知道世界上没有魔法笔。只有当我努力工作的。时候，我才能写出美丽的文字。
As is vividly depicted in the picture,before the circulation desk stands a student,who wants to find a shortcut to learning,with the librarian pointing it to the lower part of the picture,we can see some English characters which read “ How To Do Well In School Without Studying is over there in the fiction section”。
如图所示，在流通台前站着一名学生，他想找到一条学习的捷径，图书管理员将其指向他。在图片的下半部分，我们可以看到一些英文字符，上面写着“如何在不学习的情况下做好学校在小说部分”。
As to me, I think there is no shortcut to success,and the English characters under the picture also mean that the shortcut to success only exist in the virtual world.Whether you can do well in school is based on the effort that you spend on study.That is to say,the more diligent you are,the better your study is.Diligent is momentous and fundamental to people what the soul is vital and significant to
对我来说，我认为成功没有捷径，图片下面的。英文字符也意味着成功的捷径只存在于虚拟世界中。你能否在学校取得好成绩取决于你在学习上所付出的努力。也就是说，你越勤奋，你的学习就越好。勤奋对人来说是重要和根本的，灵魂对人来说至关重要
us.Had it not been for it,we could not have been success.The story of Ma Yun,founder of China’s online trading empire,best prove the significance of diligent in realizing personal ambition and creating value to the world.
如果不是因为它，我们不可能成功。中国网络交易帝国创始人马云的故事最能证明勤奋实现个人抱负和为世界创造价值的意义。
“The most crucial part of your life,”once wrote a distinguished professor, “is to cultivate the quality of diligent.”I was,and remains,the supporter of the idea that “There is no shortcut to learning.”
一位著名教授曾写道：“你生命中最重要的部分是培养勤奋的品质。”我过去是，现在仍然是“学习没有捷径可走”这一观点的支持者