在平平淡淡的学习、工作、生活中,大家总少不了接触作文吧,借助作文可以宣泄心中的情感,调节自己的心情。你写作文时总是无从下笔?
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资,而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择,提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由,提纲第3点要求表明我的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的。侧重点:注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明我的倾向并说明理由。
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression due to lack of enough money. However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)现在有越来越多人的选择节食,有的人是为了健康,但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材
2)分析节食减肥可能带来的影响
3)你的建议
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因,提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响,提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出“我”的建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出“我”的建议。
On Dieting
Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They [2]become the leading numbers who go on a diet.
[3]However, dieting might [4]bring great negative effects on people. [3]For one thing, quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting [5]not only is useless but also might damage their health. [3]For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. [3]As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.
[6]Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. [3]In my opinion, dieting,[7]for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. [8]Only with right guidance can dieting work [9]as we expect.
[1]“尤其”,表示强调。
[2]“成为主力军”。
[3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[4]用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。
[5]“not only… but also”用于连接并列成分。
[6]“考虑到,鉴于”,介词。
[7]“不管因为什么原因”,whatever意为“无论什么”。
[8]“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。
[9]“像我们期望的那样”。
1.佳句:For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.
临摹:基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。
2.佳句:In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance.
临摹: 无论你的目标是什么,你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。
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3.佳句:Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.
临摹:只有修满足够的学分,学生才能够获准毕业。
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【KEY】
1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality
2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it.
3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡
2)分析产生该现象的原因
3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。
Credit Cards on Campus
In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students. With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
网络犯罪
Cyber Crimes
With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers. As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses.
However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly. Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses.
As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes. For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission. For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes.
On Students Interpersonal Relationship Positive interpersonal relationships are vital for optimal humsit growth and development. However, in recent years, educators have expressed their concern about the ability of interpersonal relationship among students in institutions of higher education. According to a survey conducted by Hebei University, many college-age students regard interpersonal relationship as the biggest headache. Increasing diversity and rapid changes m our society make interacting with others more and more complex and difficult. With 1 united life experiences and social skills, college students face more challenges in dealing with interpersonal relationship. This is especially true for students coming from rural areas. Because of the lack of social skills, they are often rejected by others _ and rejection gives them even fewer chances to leam how to interact with others.
In my opinion, now that interpersonal relationship is important to students devclopmentj colleges should offer courses about comprehensive interpersonal relationships. The course should address the knowledge,skills, attitudes and behaviors involved in participating in positive relationships in the family and with individuals at school, m the conununity and in the workplace.
Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society willbring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trendfor people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.
Some people favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables theaging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbershave come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view thatpostponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannotarouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.
I am convinced that we should balance old people interest and this aging society. Thus, if thoseseniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work andperform their tasks. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people life will be promising, hopeful and rosy.
My Closest Friend in University
In choosing a friend, one should be very careful. A good friend is as valuable as a precious stone. He can help you study. You can have fun together and she is a genius in understanding and tolerant others, and as a friend, she is honest and reliable.
Above all else, I look for understanding in a friend. As good friend, she always understands what another person is feeling. She is not quick to judge, instead, she tries to think of ways to be helpful. Further more, she is also a good listener. Of course, I m one of the others .
At the same time, however, she is a honest friend. She doesn t look for faults in me. But she does not ignore them either, she once said to me that she would rather focus on my good points. In short, she can understand me and accept me mostly.
As a good friend, she is also reliable. I can always depend on her, especially during the days when I prepared for my graduate acceptance test last year. And, if she tells me somewhere at a certain tine, I can be sure she well be there. If I need a favor she ll do her best to help me. If I am in trouble, she ll not desert me.
So when you meet someone who is reliable, honest, and understanding, I ll tell you that you have found a good friend.
在选择朋友时,应该非常小心。一个好朋友像宝石一样珍贵。他可以帮助你学习。你可以有乐趣,她是一个天才的理解和宽容别人,作为一个朋友,她是诚实和可靠。
首先,我寻找一个朋友的理解。作为一个好朋友,她总是了解别人的感受。她不快去评判,相反,她试图想办法是有益的`。此外,她也是一个很好的听众。当然,我是其中的一个。
然而,在同一时间,她是一个诚实的朋友。她不找我的。缺点。但她也不理他们,她曾经对我说,她宁愿集中于我的好点。总之,她能理解我,接受我的大部分。
作为一个好朋友,她也是可靠的。我可以一直依赖于她,特别是在我准备毕业考试的日子里。而且,如果她告诉我在某个特定的时间,我可以肯定她也在那里。如果我需要帮助的话,她会尽力帮助我的。如果我陷入困境,她就不会抛弃我。
所以当你遇到一个可靠、诚实和理解的人,我会告诉你,你已经找到了一个好朋友。
Currently, an increasing numberof people begin to use Internet to take courses and acquire knowledge. Onlinelearning is booming all around the world. It is providing many options withlearners in terms of time, locations, subjects and costs.
Online learning greatly promoteslearners’ studying efficiency and teachers’ productivity. As a result, updatedknowledge will reach those students in isolated areas at a higher speed, whichcan make many of them keep pace with the time. Additionally, students candecide their learning location and time much more freely. Notably, because transportationand accommodation will not trouble E-learners, learning cost will be largelylowered. These advantages might decrease the number of people who routinelyattend school learning.
From my point of view, personal interactionbetween teachers and students in schools is irreplaceable. It is a good ideathat we combine E-learning and attending school together. Learning is not asimple multiple-choice question but an important issue that needs your tryingand involvement.
04 Electricity
The modern age is an age of electricity. People are so used to electric lights, radio, televisions, and telephones that it is hard to imagine what life would be like without them. When there is a power failure, people grope about in flickering candlelight, cars hesitate in the streets because there are no traffic lights to guide them, and food spoils in silent refrigerators.
Yet, people began to understand how electricity works only a little more than two centuriesago. Nature has apparently been experimenting in this field for million of years. Scientists are discovering more and more that the living world may hold many interesting secrets of electricity that could benefit humanity.
All living cell send out tiny pulses of electricity. As the heart beats, it sends out pulses of record; they form an electrocardiogram, which a doctor can study to determine how well the heart is working. The brain, too, sends out brain waves of electricity, which can be recorded in an electroencephalogram.
The electric currents generated by most living cells are extremely small – often so small that sensitive instruments are needed to record them. But in some animals, certain muscle cells have become so specialized as electrical generators that they do not work as muscle cells at all. When large numbers of these cell are linked together, the effects can be astonishing.The electric eel is an amazing storage battery. It can seed a jolt of as much as eight hundred volts of electricity through the water in which it live. ( An electric house current is only one hundred twenty volts.) As many as four-fifths of all the cells in the electric eel’s body are specialized for generating electricity, and the strength of the shock it can deliver corresponds roughly to length of its body.
1.目前越来越多的人接受整形手术
2.人们因为不同的`原-因接受整形手术
3.作为大学生我的看法
范文:
Plastic Surgery
Appearance was once regarded as something we were born with and fixed. However, it is a different story now. Thanks to the advanced medical technology, people are able to change their original faces or other body parts, and plastic surgery now enjoys great popularity around the world.
People take plastic surgery for different reasons. Some spend a great deal of money on the plastic surgery because they dream of becoming a film or TV star but they are not beautiful by birth. Some, however, have to take the surgery because of certain birth defects, such as harelip and lameness, and injuries in accidents. There emerges a new group nowadays — college fresh female grads who insist that a beauty will land a job much more easily.
In my view, it’s not necessary that people try to beautify themselves. What we should bear in mind is that being natural is being beautiful. What’s more, people should judge others by their capacity instead of their appearances.
College Students’Social Responsibilities
If you Google“the 71st Anniversary of the Nanjing Massacre”(in Chinese)on the Internet,you will be impressed by the video show of a girl’s special commemoration.After watching the video.I Was wondering where college students were.Taking into consideration their indifference to other historic events such as the May 4 Movement,we can conclude that college students lack the due social responsibilities.
However,we should not simply criticize their indifference,and analysis should be made to reckon with underlying reasons.Firstly,college students are imposed excessive pressure by the job market.They have to pay more attention to their studies.Secondly,many students believe that the history has already been borne in mind,and it is unnecessary to commemorate historic anniversaries each year.For them,it is better to internalize the humiliated history and work hard than to hold ceremonies without concrete contents.
To my way of thinking,college students should not keep silent on those occasions.It is our responsibilities to voice Our aspirations and let the society know that we have not forgotten the history.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡
2)分析产生该现象的原因
3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 我要高分
Credit Cards on Campus
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。
Credit Cards on Campus
In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
[4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. [5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
[5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. [9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
Knowledge and Diploma
With the development of the society, more and more people enroll in the postgraduate examination for getting a igher companies are inclined to hire the people with higher diploma.It seems that having high diploma means a better future.
However , is it really true that high diploma equals to high ability or profound knowledge?Some people do not agree this.They claim that ability or Microsoft,for example,he does not have an MBA degree which is believed to play a vital role in the success in commercial life.Furthermore ,Sam Walton of Wal-Mart Stores Inc. dose not have one eithere,but they are among the most successful man in the commercial world.
In my opinion, diploma is not equal to knowledge,A diploma is a piece of paper which establisher your education degree.But your true ability and the real knowledge coma from your hard work and endowment.If you got a diploma by dishonest behabior,no matter how high it is ,it stands for nothing.
开头部分
1:The time flies, we haven't seen each other for a long time. All the things here are going on pretty well, I just miss you so much!
时间过得很快,我们已经很久没见了。这里一切都好,就是很想你。
2:It is so great to hear from you again. 能再次收到你的来信我很开心。
3:Long time no see! 好久不见。
4:I trust that everything is going smoothly for you. 我相信你那里一切都好。
5:It is a great pleasure for me to have this wonderful chance to put pen to paper and send greetings to you.
很高兴我有这样的机会提笔给你写信,寄给你我的问候和祝福。
中间部分:
Give advice:
In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following action: 在下认为,如果你能采取以下措施,将是一种明智的选择。
I hope you will not find it too forward for me to suggest that you... 请原谅我的。直接,不过,希望你能___________。
In my experience, it seems that _______ would make sense in your situation. 从我的经验来看,针对你的情况,似乎________会有帮助。 At the risk of overstepping my boundaries, allow me to suggest that you____。 请原谅我的冒昧,不过我建议你_____________。 Gratitude I truly appreciate your kindness. 我很欣赏你的仁慈。
I am grateful to you for... 非常感谢你_________________-。
I appreciate it more than I can say. 我对你表示万分感谢。
I can never thank you enough. 万分感谢。
I wish there were a better word than " thanks " to express my appreciation for your generous help.
其实,对你的帮助岂能用"谢谢"二字可以表达的。
It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.
你对我如此慷慨,真是对您感激不尽。
Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality. 非常感谢你的仁慈和好客。
Now we have arrived back home safe and sound. 现在我已经安全到家。
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for... 我打从心底谢谢你(真诚地感谢你)。
Thank you again for your kindness. 谢谢你的好意。
Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology. 请接受我最诚挚、最深刻的道歉。
I apologize most sincerely for... 我诚挚地对___________向你道歉。 I am truly sorry to have done...
我对________向你表示道歉。 Please forgive me... 请原谅我曾__________。
I owe you an apology... 我为______向你道歉。
I regret to inform you that I am unable to do.. 很遗憾地告诉你,我没法___________。
I am so sorry to have put you through so much trouble... 很抱歉给你带来这么多麻烦,__________。
Invitation
The honor of your presence is requested... 若你能出席________,我(们)将感到万分荣幸。
It's a pleasure for me to invite you to... 我很荣幸地邀请你参加__________。
We sincerely hope that you make it. 我们真诚地希望你能参加。
We would be honored to have you there with us... 如果您能参加我们的__________,我们将不甚荣幸。
I will cover all the expense involved. 我将负担所有的费用。
Sympathy
I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and I want to extend to you my unwavering support.
我能想象你所经历的一切,而且,我想告诉你,我会永远支持你。
Complain I am writing to express my dissatisfaction withat... 我写这封信是想告诉你们我对________不是很满意。
I very much regret to have to inform you that... 很遗憾地通知你,__________。
I would like to draw the attention of the authorities concerned to the ...我想就_____________问题引起有关部门的重视。 I feel something ought to be done about... 我觉得________方面还可以作一些努力(需要改进)。
I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible. 我希望以上问题(情况)能尽快解决(改进)。
Your effort to provide good services will be highly appreciated by all. 我们会很感激您作出的一切努力。
We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss. 我们真的希望你们能对损失作出补偿。
Inquiry I would like to request some information about...
我想对_______问题向您咨询。
My first question is... 我的问题就是__________。
I am greatly concerned about... 我对_________较为关注。
Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.
我是否需要再寄其他资料给你,请及时告知。
Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.
能否针对上述的问题寄些相关的小册子给我。