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由于没有年代变化,所以体现的是不同的比例
第一段第一句总说:As is clearly demonstrated in the pie graph above,(1)there were different factors/purposes that college students would consider when they were travelling.
(2)there were different proportions of the students in a university who did some sightseeing for different purposes.
(go sightseeing /travel around)
第一段第二句数据描述:To be more specific,among these categories, appreciating the scenery was the largest(/highest/ hugest /lowest/smallest) proportion with the percentage of 37% ,after which relieving t he pressure came which is 20% ,followed by making more friends ,cultivating the independent ability and other purposes with the percentages of 9% , 6% and 15% respectively.
第二段第一句过渡:From my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation.
第二段第二句因果论证:Firstly,it was due to the shift from material pursuit to spiritual needs that most college students travelled to admire the beautiful view.万能因果2
第二段第三句因果论证:Secondly, college students faced more setbacks and challenges in academic research and job market currently,which could give rise to the fact that they had to relieve pressure by travelling.(英语一万能因果素材)
第二段第四句Lastly, Jack Ma has said,“Never should we ignore the significance of independence and friendship no matter who we are.”Therefore, some students travelled for the purpose of making friends and developing independent spirit.(书信目的模板短语)
第三段第一句结论:Based on what has been argued, it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for Chinese college students.
第二句建议: What can be suggested is that parents and teachers should center on the college students’ moods.(也可以改为 it is advisable for parents and teachers to center on the students’ feeling 或者 it is advisable for college teachers and parents to advocate this action of sightseeing )
第三句展望: Unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2015 饼状图 春节花销
As is clearly demonstrated in the pie graph above, there are different factors that citizens would consider when spend their money during the Spring Festival.
(首句第二种写法。different proportions of the money that consumers spend on three main aspects and some others )
简单版本的饼状图模板To be more specific,among these categories, ( buying Spring Festival gifts )was the largest proportion which was 40%. (the expense of transportation),(parties and dinners ) and(others) accounted for 20% respectively.
From my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. Firstly, it is due to a long-established social
tradition of visiting relatives and friends that most citizens spend the most money on giving gifts. Secondly some people would like to communicate with friends and relatives ,which gives rise to the fact that they spend more money on parties and dinners. Lastly,Jack Ma has said ,”Never should we ignore the importance of our parents no matter where we go.” Thus, nearly everyone will return home by
various transportation.
第三段第一句结论:Based on what has been argued, it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really true for Chinese citizens.
(建议句省略,因为不需要建议)
第二句展望: Unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2014 城市乡村人口变化As is clearly demonstrated in the pie graph above, there were obvious changes in the number of civil and urban population in china during 20 be more specific, the number of rural population in China decreased slightly from834 million in 1990 to 674 in the contrary,there was an obvious upward trend of the number of urban population from 300 million in 2013 million to 1990 million in 2010.
From my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. Firstly,it was due to the the advancement and development of the health care and education that more rural people came to big cities. Secondly ,the government advocated building big cities ,which gave rise to the fact that more people came to metropolises. Lastly, Jack Ma has said,“Never should we ignore the importance of geographical advantage no matter what we do.”Thus , more people went to big cities.
第三段第一句Based on what has been argued, it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for Chinese citizens.
第二句建议: What can be suggested is that average people should center on this population change.
第三句展望: Unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2013As is demonstrated in the bar graph above, there are different proportions of the students who have a part-time job in a college. To be more specific,among these categories, ( the senior students ) are the largest proportion which is . (The junior students),(the sophomore ) and( the freshman) account for and respectively.
From my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. Firstly,it is because the senior students needed working experience to hunt for a ideal job that most of them have part-time jobs. Secondly, the senior students want to broaden their horizon , which gives rise to the fact that they are eager to find some part-time jobs. Lastly, Jack Ma has said ,“ Never should we ignore the significance of internship no matter what we do. ”
第三段第一句Based on what has been argued, it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for College students. 第二句建议: What can be suggested is that parents and colleges should center on this phenomenon.第三句展望: Unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2012As is demonstrated in the bar graph above,there are different proportions in the employees’ satisfaction with their company from 3 periods of age.( there are different proportions of employees who have difficult attitudes towards their company.) To be more specific,among the categories, employees aged from 41 to 50 who are dissatisfied with the company is the largest percentage which is 64% . employees under 40 years old and above 50 who are disappointed account for and 10%.
From my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. Firstly,it is because employees with the age between 41 and 50 have more family burden that most of them want higher salary . Secondly, most employees over the age of 50 have been on a higher position , which gives rise to the fact that more of them are satisfied with the current situation. Lastly, Jack Ma has said ,“ Never should we ignore the significance of young employees’ need no matter what we do. ”
第三段第一句Based on what has been argued, it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really unreasonable and negative for the company. 第二句建议: What can be suggested is that the head of the company should center on this phenomenon.第三句展望: Unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2011As is demonstrated in the bar graph above,there were obvious changes in the proportion /sale of three kinds of car brands in China from 2008 to 2009. To be more specific,the proportion of Chinese auto brands increased dramatically from about 25% in 2008 to approximate 33% in 2009. On the contrary, there was a downward trend in the sale of Japanese auto brands from around 35% in 2008 to about 25% in 2009. The percentage of American car brands remained stable during the same period.
From my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. Firstly,it is because Chinese auto-making technology and Chinese brands auto corporation have advanced and flourished recently that the sale of Chinese brands jumped rapidly. ( An increasing number of consumers choose cars such as Chery and BYD.)In addition, some Japanese auto companies propagate their cars in an exaggerated way , which contributes to the fact that growing consumers in China discard/abandon brands like Toyota and , President (具体人名) has advocated: “ Never should we ignore national brands wherever we go.”These words strike a deeper chord in the hearts of the people. (Such Chinese corporation as BYD designs their brand with innovation using Chinese character 唐 , which arises much interest of Chinese consumers.)
Based on what has been argued it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really/clearly reasonable and positive for Chinese car brands. It is advisable for Japanese car brands to reflect on their undesirable behaviors in order to turn the table in the competition. Unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
Directions:
Write a short essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart and
2) give your comments.
You should write at least 150 words.
Write your essay on ANWER SHEET 2.(15 points)
审题谋篇:
继2010年考察关于“手机入网”的图表作文之后,2011年考研英语(二)连续第二年考察图表作文。巧合的是,本题与英语(二)大纲样题同为关于汽车或交通问题的图表作文,有些表达可以借鉴。2010年1月,日本丰田汽车召回事件引起汽车业关注,日系轿车在中国大陆的形象一落千丈,销量急剧下降。3月,中国吉利汽车集团收购沃尔沃再次震惊世界,中国国产品牌引以为豪,销量日增。本题即考察了“汽车”这一今年热门话题。
本题要求为两点,第一点提纲应写成第一段图表描述,无需发表太多议论,就图论图进行描述即可。第二段可以进行原因列举,最好从国产汽车销量上升、日系下降的具体原因着手分析。一方面,由于国产轿车科技进步、价格促销,从而销量大涨;另一方面,由于日系轿车深陷丑闻、行业欺诈,从而优势殆尽。
第三段可进行归纳结论或提出建议措施,针对国产轿车品牌如何保持并继续扩大市场份额,进行具体的评论或总结。
As can be seen clearly from the chart, the market share taken by domestic car brands increased rapidly from 25% in 20008 to nearly 35% in 2009, while conversely, the market share owned by Japanese car brands dropped by 10% from 35% in 2008 to 25% in 2008. What’s more, the market share taken by American car brands is on the upward trend, from 10% to nearly 15%.
Three reasons, in my opinion, can account for the changes in car market in these two years. First, the rise of Chinese cars is of little surprise as we have seen Chinese enterprises’ commitment to developing self-owned technologies, which not only free them from potential risks, but also bring about long-term benefit. Second, Japanese cars, which used to be highly praised for their outstanding quality and superior stability, is now reeling from a crisis of confidence. Last, the improvement of American cars’ performance must be attributed to the smart marketing strategy employed by American sellers. They launched a lot of marketing campaigns designed specially for Chinese market, which won them applaud as well as benefit.
In order to maintain the good momentum of development, domestic cars should on one hand stick to their self-independent policy, and on the other, learn some experiences from Japanese car’s failures and Americans’ success.
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