在平平淡淡的学习、工作、生活中，大家最不陌生的就是作文了吧，作文是从内部言语向外部言语的过渡，即从经过压缩的简要的、自己能明白的语言，向开展的'、具有规范语法结构的、能为他人所理解的外部语言形式的转化。相信很多朋友都对写作文感到非常苦恼吧，
dear jack, i am sorry about that you could not take part in our activity. let me introduce something about this activity. last weekend, we went to the wetland park for picomic. in the morning, we gathered in our school gate, then we went there by bike. after going sightsee in the wetland park, we started to going boating. it is an interesting activity that i have never tried. in the afternoon, we held a fishing competition. the river is clean and the fish is fresh. and at about 6 o'clock, we went back home. it was a happy day. i hope you can join us next time. please reply as soon as possible.fromlihua
Nowadays more and more families own private cars. Private cars, as the product of modem civilization, have been playing a vital role in peoples daily activities. First, private cars are a convenient means of transportation. You can go wherever you like. Secondly, there is no doubt that private cars will have a great impact on the economic growth. The rapid car industry growth will contribute much to keeping the countrys economy growing at a higher rate in the near futrue.
But every coin has two sides. The development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems. For example, the polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health, too many private cars will lead to traffic jams and a great deal of energy will be wasted and so on.
So I think we should take advantages of private cars and make them serve us better. Meantime we hope that satisfactory solutions to these negative problems will be found soon.
现在，越来越多的家庭拥有私家车。私家车作为现代文明的产物，在人们日常生活中扮演了重要的角色。首先，私家车是很方便的交通工具，你可以开车到处跑；其次，毫无疑问私家车对经，济的增长起到很大的作用。在不远的将来，快速发展的汽车工业在保持国家以较高速度的增长方面将做出很大的贡献。
当然，任何事物都有其两面性。快速发展的私家车会导致一系列问题。例如，汽车排出的废气对人体有很大的伤害，太多的私家车会导致交通阻塞，很多能源被浪费等。
This morning I wake up, I found white outside, its snowing! I quickly got dressed and went downstairs grandma.
Came to the front, foot in the white snow "through" the sound. The tree, the roof, the car is covered white snow, snow in the tree, in particular, like pieces of blooming flowers. Covered with white snow vehicle, does not know by which the naughty boy painted all kinds of pictures, very funny.
When I was watching the snow, my back doesnt know what was hit, I looked back a look, turned out to be a grandma threw a snowball, I rub a good big snowball away in the past, hit on the head of the grandma. In this way, a "snowball fight" began. Finally, we both tired, exhausted, grandma said: "ok, dont play, go home!" "Well, Im tired too." I replied.
Upstairs came home, I reluctantly took one look at the beautiful snow, really good beautiful beauty.
今天早上我一觉醒来，发现外面白茫茫的，下雪了！我赶紧穿好衣服和奶奶下了楼。
来到楼前，脚踩在洁白的雪上发出了“咯吱咯吱”的声音。树上、房顶、车上都盖上了白白的雪，特别是树上的。雪，就像一朵朵盛开的白花。盖着白雪的车辆，不知被哪个调皮的孩子画上了各种各样的图画，好玩极了。
正当我欣赏着雪景时，我的后背不知被什么撞了一下，我回头一看，原来是奶奶扔了一个雪球，我也搓了一个好大的雪球扔了过去，正好打在了奶奶的头上。就这样，一场“雪球大战”开始了。最后，我们双方累得筋疲力尽，奶奶说：“行啦，别玩了，回家吧！”“嗯，我都累得不行了。”我回答道。
上楼回家的时候，我依依不舍地看了一眼那美丽的雪景，真的好美好美。
I like playing basketball that is my favorite sports.I play it twice a week and that is health for me and strengthen my muscle.
Basketball is an international sports that have many competitions in world.Many people love this sports and exercise it every day.It canmake me enjoythe active,passion and interesting process.In addition we can get many friends in this process and being happy as well.Also this canenhance our body healthy and stronger.You can with your friends play this sports together,because it wouldgive you a lot of fun.
Above all,Ireally love play basketballbecause it is my favorite you love it,just do it! Because we are young now,do somegood sports and maintain this condition.
教学目标：
（1）知识与能力目标：
A通过调动学生听、说、读等方面积极性，开阔思路，促进写作能力的提高。
B 训练学生对情景作文的审题能力，拓展对给定信息点的想象空间。
C 运用基本语法知识表达思想感情。
D 掌握高考中情景作文的应试策略。
（2）德育目标：
A 情景作文主要是以日常生活中所发生的事为背景，教育、引导学生要尊重他人的感情。
B 辨证理解理由的合理性。
教学重点：
（1） 针对高考中以“理由与借口”为题材的情景作文，如何制定策略。
（2） 以小组讨论为形式，激活思维。
教学难点：
（1） 如何获取、筛选信息，以“合理”，“创新”为原则，展开想象。
（2） 语言知识在写作中的运用，如何有效表达个人情感，感染读者。
教学设计思路：
本课既是高三英语情景作文教学的有益探索与尝试，也是通过引入“头脑风暴”的思想，帮助学生分析、整理信息，理清思路，提高英语写作能力的有效途径和方法。学生在逐步拓展思维的同时，调动身体的各个器官来观看、讨论、阅读，以求在“动”中写作，最后组织语言，将这个合理并有创新的想法写成文章。同时，还要将这种思维渗透到日常生活中，做到礼貌待人，慎用“理由”，尊重他人的感情，以致师生都会从本课中受到启发，做到教学相长。
教学媒体：计算机 录像机
教学过程：
第一步 引入
A 简述本课将对以“理由与借口”为题材的高考情景作文进行指导与训练。
B 通过校园内的采访录像，总结出在何种情况下需要“理由与借口”。
第二步
A 以竞赛为形式，在指定的情景下将与之相关的所有想法展示出来，并以“合理、创新”为原则进行筛选、分类，从中引出“头脑风暴”的概念，并加以解释。
B 列举日常生活中的情景与理由，帮助学生打开思路。
第三步
A将学生分为5组，每组设一情景，进行小组讨论，以前面做过的指导为例，筛选信息，并将其拓展成文，再加以讲评。
B 总结写作策略。
第四步
阅读一篇与本题材相关的文章，使学生懂得在日常生活的交往中要尊重他人的感情，以深化本课的主题，加深学生对该题材作文的了解与认识，从而使思维上升到一个新的高度。
第五步
作业 A根据所提示情景，再练习一篇内容相关的情景作文。
B 认真思考对命题作文的写作策略与情景写作之间的联系。
Teaching Plan
Date: Nov.25th, 20xx
Class and Grade: Class 2, Senior Grade Three
Subject: Brain Storm and Situational Wring
Teacher: Zhang Rong
ⅠTeaching Objectives:
1、 To improve the students’ writng skills by means of watching, speaking and reading.
2、 To enhance the interests of the students in terms of English wring and encourage them to fully develop their ability of imagination.
3、 To express their ideas effectively in formal writing and in the teaching process, the interactive teaching mold is tested in class.
ⅡTeaching difficulties:
1、 To be creative and reasonable in the development of imagination, and improve the ability of analyzing accordingly.
2、 To exchange ideas in the form of discussion in groups and develop the shinning points into compositions.
Ⅲ Teaching aids:
Computer Video Cassette Player Blackboard
Ⅳ Procedures:
Step1 Turning-in
1A brief introduction of the topic in situational composition-making excuses.
2、 Summon up the ideas related to the topic “Under what condition people need to make excuse”。
Step 2 presentation
Introduce the concept of brain storm in the form of a competition.
Step 3 Class activity
Try to develop the composition according to the given situation in each group with reference to the writing strategy.
Step 4 Reading
Read a passage titled the truth about excuses, aiming to improve the way students communicate in their daily lives.
Step 5 Assignment
1、 Writing practice
2、 Thinking about the strategies for instruction-based wring.
1.Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
镜湖在芜湖市可是个家喻户晓的地方，外地人来芜湖必看的一景。现在的镜湖风景优美，是市民休闲的好去处。可你知道以前的镜湖是什么样子吗？听我给你讲讲吧。
在上世纪90年代中后期，镜湖的水体呈高富营养化状态，水质严重恶化，水变成了黄色。恶化的原因主要有：芜湖市某医院通过地下水道将大量未经处理的污物、污水直接排进了镜湖；部分素质不高的市民往镜湖里倒垃圾；最可气的是镜湖风景区的某些工作人员竟然在镜湖里洗拖把！慢慢地，镜湖水变成了黄色，湖面上漂浮着许多垃圾，还散发着一股臭味。来到镜湖边的人们都捂着鼻子跑开了，嘴里还不停地说：“真臭！臭死了！”
一九九九年DDD二０００年，芜湖市人民政府号召全市人民清理镜湖。首先，工作人员用机器将湖水抽干，再由党员带头和市民们一起挖掉淤泥，最后注入清澈的水。我外公是党员，他有着亲身体验，外公说，那次劳动很累，但改善了镜湖的水质，大伙儿都感到很高兴。
现在人们的环保意识增强了，再也没有人往镜湖里扔垃圾、排污水了。当你来到镜湖时，你会看到一片清澈的湖水，水底游来游去的小鱼，湖水旁婀娜的垂柳和刚长出来的青青的小草。
有了90年代的教训，我们一定要做个讲文明的好孩子，要保护镜湖水质，保持生态平衡。
Nowadays, with the development of high technology, smart phone is very popular among the high school students. The smart phone once was thought to be forbidden using in the class, now has become very common tool for students. A lot of students keep their eyes on the phone all the time, even in the class, they still check on it. Teachers are upset about this situation, because they feel most students ignoring them when they are passing the knowledge. Some teacher think it is time to let the students hand in their smart phones in the class and after class, these communicational tool will be turned back. I dont think it is a good idea. Even for the teachers, they count on their phones so much, let alone for the students. The teachers should improve their teaching method to catch the students interest.
Early in the morning, I opened my computer and read the news. There was the news about a driver had the heart disease attack when he was driving the bus, there were more than 40 people in the bus. The driver stopped the bus off the road and then stopped his breath. I was so touched by the driver, in the emergency situation, he considered the passengers lives in the first place. It is his sense of responsibility that makes him to do it. The driver sets the good example to the public, he shows the importance of responsibility. No matter what we do, we should not forget about taking our responsibility. If people dont take their own responsibility, then things will be out of order, the world will be in the mess. Responsibility always comes first.
We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation.
In order to leave school with no regrets, I’ll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and spare no effort to realize my dream of entering a good university. Meanwhile, I think it necessary for me to have a heart-to- heart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me, for I do treasure friendship. In addition, doing something for my class and my school is also included in my plan. Above all, I’d like to express my gratitude to all the teachers with whose help I have make continuous progress in the past three years and my parents who have taken so good care of me. Finally, I would like to take some photos of my teachers, classmates and school as reminders.
日记：高三学习十分紧张，所以班长建议本周去郊外放松一下，享受秋天的美景。请你在今天的日记里发表对班长建议的想法。
October 12, 20xx, Monday Fine
It is universally acknowledged that Senior Three is undoubtedly a critical phase of life. The school life is extremely busy, so our monitor suggests that we have an outing to relax ourselves this weekend.
It is terrific! After a month s study, I feel we really need a break for one day, and so do some of my friends. Senior Three should not be filled with study only and relaxation is also an important part. Sometimes relaxation is more useful than an hour s hard work. While having an outing, we can relax ourselves and enjoy the beautiful scenery of autumn --- yellow leaves, attractive sunset against the blue sky and so on. Isn t it enjoyable? After the outing, I think all the students will have a better physical and mental state to meet the further challenges we may come across and cope with difficulties for ourselves.
If one wants to do well in an examination, the revision is one of the most important factors. After so many years of study and examination experience, I summarize some useful review methods that should be helpful to other students.
Firstly, slowing down the speed of review appropriately so that you can set aside more time to think about your reviewing plan and make a summary for the previous stage. Moreove, you can make an adjustment for your review if necessary.Secondly, repeated training is so important that it can help you to better understand the knowledge of the error-prone. Thirdly, the teacher should reduce the amount of homework to improve the quality of review. That is so say, the teacher should give more time and freedom to students. Last but not the least, having a good rest also plays a dominant role during the reviewing process, for sufficient energy is the ensurance of efficient revision.
Perhaps each student has their own unique review method which requires students to summarize constantly. After all, the best method is the one that ‘s right for you.
I don't remember how many examinations I've taken since I began my schooling. Truth to tell, I don't like examinations at all. I dare say that, in fact, no student likes examinations.
We often hear people say Examinations are teachers' magic weapon, so most of us may think it is our teachers who give us students so many examinations. But I don't think so. Almost all of them have once been students before they became teachers. We don't like examinations, and neither do our teachers, which may be reasonably concluded. What's more,the more examinations we take, the more time will be taken from our teachers and the more troubles our teachers have to take.
It is the system in our country, I think, that gives us students so many examinations. If there were no entrance examinations, and all the students could go up to the higher grades without competition, there would not be so many examinations in primary and middle schools. So it is important and necessary to reform the entrance system. Only in this way can examinations be GREatly reduced, and then all the students will be happier.
Dear Librarian,
亲爱的图书管理员：
Thank you very much for offering me the chance to make suggestions to improve the service of library 。I love our library which holds thousands of books and I want to give your some suggestions 。
非常感谢你给我这个机会来提一些建议来完善图书馆服务。我很喜欢我们有成千上万的书的图书馆，我也想给一些建议。
Due to the fact that there is no plant in our library, I hope that you can add some in it 。It will be a great thing to read in a library filled with plants. In my spare time, I often go to the library and read some books 。And I find students have to stand between the shelves for hours 。It is a little tired for them to do so. It may be a good idea to add some chairs. Another suggestion is that school should reduce the students reading in the library. We are long for a quiet environment.
由于我们图书馆没有植物，我希望可以种一些植物在里面。在一个充满植物的图书馆看书是很棒的。在我的业余时间，我经常去图书馆看书。我发现学生们得站在两个书架间数时来看书。这样的话他们会有点累。加一些椅子也许会是个好主意。另一个建议是学校应该减少在图书馆看书的学生数量。我们都希望有一个安静的环境。
Nowadays, more and more people are easily get into troubles and gain pressure almost at every time. For students, most of them are studying under great pressure. For adults, nearly all of them feel stressed out. People of all ages are facing pressure because the growing competition. There's no exception.
For pressure do cause a lot of trouble for our daily life. It's best for us to make some plans for reducing them. In my point of view, we should first have a right attitude towards failure. We should learn to face our disadvantages and mistakes. No one is if we draw lessons from failure can we improve ourselves. Then, we should take enough exercise to strengthen our body. To be healthy is the most important thing for standing pressure. What's more, we can spend our holiday going sightseeing. Nature could help us forget all the troubles and relax better than ourselves. Then once we get back to our work or study, we can put all our energy into it.
From what has been discussed above, it's really important to reduce pressure to live a more relaxing life. Let's just try our best to achieve a comfortable life.
It is known to all that China has the history of more than 5,000 years and the culture influences generations. No matter where people live, they keep the traditional festivals. Such as the people who live in Chinatown. Though some of them have been immigrants, they still celebrate the traditional festivals. So in every corner of Chinatown, the Chinese traditional features can be seen everywhere. The preservation of the traditional culture is the key to help the country live so long. After the long period of time, the essence of the culture part have been inherited while the negative part has been removed. Many culture even influences the foreign country, such as Confucius Institution, where foreigners learn Chinese culture and mandarin. Though we are facing the impact of Hollywood culture, the traditional festivals provides an important way to save local culture.
众所周知，中国有着5000多年的历史，其文化影响了好几代人。不管人们住在哪里，他们都会保留传统节日。像住在唐人街的人，虽然有些人是移民过去的，但他们仍然庆祝传统节日，所以在唐人街的每个角落，中国传统文化随处可见。保护传统文化是让国家长久存在的关键。长期以来，文化的精华部分已被继承，而消极部分已被消除。许多文化甚至影响到外国，例如成立孔子学院给外国人学习中国文化和普通话。虽然我们正面临着好莱坞文化的冲击，但传统节日为保存当地文化提供了重要的途径。
However hard the situation is, we shouldn't lose our heart, because we have our dreams. Our dreams are always glorious. We also have enthusiasm that will make our dreams come true. But we must have the willingness to work hard, since if we work hard, some miracles will happen. Nothing good will happen without our hard work.
不管情况多么艰难，我们都不应该迷失自己，因为我们还有梦想。我们的梦想总是光荣的。我们也有能使我们梦想成真的热情。但我们必须要有努力工作的意愿，因为如果我们努力工作，会有奇迹发生的。如果不如理工作就不会有好的事情发生。
What's more, when we are unhappy, we can think about our dreams, so that we will be more enthusiastic. When we are defeated, we should stand up and say," I'm not a failure." Please remember, “ Anything is possible to a man who has a strong determination.”
更重要的是，在我们不快心的时候，我们可以想一想我们的梦想，这样我们就会更加充满热情。在我们失败的时候，我们应该站起来说，“我不是一个失败者”。请记住，“对于一个有决心的人一切皆有可能。”
Never Give up
In this picture, we can see two men cutting earth in tunnels, hoping to find some diamonds. One makes great efforts in his work. After a long time without gains, he decides to give up, feeling disappointed. But in fact he is very close to success. With one or two more attempts of cutting, he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him. However, the other one is still cutting and he is more likely to succeed.
This story tells us a very simple but important piece of truth: we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our effort until we succeed.
Just like the diamonds in the picture, success is just waiting for my last efforts.
There is generation gap between parents and kids which becomes a commom phenomenon.This problem makes many parents confused.
After analysing, there are some following reasons.First, modern students like playing.They prefer to go out with friends rather than obey parents' wishes to stay at home. In addition, Chinese education develops slowly so that they can't control themselves well. Finally, they all have rebellious thoughts, they dislike to be restrained so that they will be far away from their parents. For example, if someone ask them to study hard, they will be annoyed. These factors caused the generation gap.
As a student, I think we should often go home to look after our parents and talk to them about our life. Moreover, we can ask our parents if there are some interesting things happened to them these days to impove the relationship. Why don't we take a walk with them after working? How about going to take them out for a meal? Let's get a move on to eliminate the generation gap!
随着互联网的发展，传统的阅读日常新闻的方式受到了挑战，越来越多的人倾向于在网上阅读新闻，而仍有一些人坚持在报纸上阅读。人们争论阅读新闻的最佳方式，在我看来，没有最佳方式，不同的人选择不同的方式。
随着互联网的发展，传统的新闻阅读方式受到了挑战。越来越多的人倾向于在网上看新闻，但有些人仍然坚持看报纸。人们争论哪种方式看新闻最好。在我看来，如果没有最好的办法，不同的人会选择不同的方式。
网上看新闻速度快，免费付费。大多数年轻人习惯了，他们每天都使用电脑，这样他们就可以依靠电脑接收各种信息。看报纸很麻烦，他们不喜欢拿着报纸，不方便。
网上看新闻又快又免费。大多数年轻人都习惯了这种方式。他们每天都使用电脑，所以他们依靠电脑接收各种信息。看报很麻烦。他们不喜欢拿报纸，很不方便。
尽管仍有许多人喜欢在报纸上阅读。尤其是老一代，在电脑普及之前，他们从报纸上看新闻，他们习惯了这种方式，即使电脑方便，他们也只是喜欢保持这种习惯。
但是，还是有很多人喜欢看报纸。尤其是老一辈，在电脑普及之前，都是通过报纸看新闻，习惯了。尽管电脑很方便，但他们仍然喜欢保持看报的习惯。
看新闻的方式多种多样，没必要去比较。我更喜欢在网上阅读它，但有时我发现当我吃早餐时，在报纸上阅读它会给我带来乐趣。
看新闻的方式很多，没必要比较。我更喜欢在网上阅读，但有时早餐时看报纸会给我带来乐趣。
Everybody has his own hobby. Hobbies not only make our life colorful, but also bring us lots of benefits. Hobbies help us to relax after a long period of hard work, and offer various activities for the people who are retiring. As to my mother, her hobby is to go square dancing after supper. She said, square dancing can make her forget her own problems and stay in good health. As to my father, his hobby is watching football games on TV. Among all my hobbies, the favorite one is reading. When I was a little girl, I love reading comic books. When I m getting old, I love fiction very much. I have so much fun from reading them. My favorite fiction is Pride and Prejudice. It not only provides knowledge, but also teaches us the right attitude toward life. I think reading makes my life complete. I will keep on reading. That s my favorite hobby.
每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好。爱好不仅让我们的生活变得丰富多彩，也给予了我们诸多好处。爱好有助于我们在长时间的工作后得到放松，还为退休的人们提供各种各样的活动。就我妈妈来说，她最大的兴趣爱好就是晚饭之后去跳广场舞。她说，广场舞让她忘记了自己的烦恼，保持身体健康。至于我爸爸，他最喜欢看足球比赛。就我自己来说，在我所以的爱好里面，我最喜欢的就是阅读小说。当我还是个小女孩的时候，我很喜欢看动漫。长大一点的时候，我爱上了小说。看小说充满了乐趣。我最喜爱的`小说是《傲慢与偏见》。它不仅教给了我很多知识，也让我对人生有了个正确的态度。阅读使我的生活变得完整，我会一直读下�
My name is Tim.lily,one of junior classmate,is one of my best friends.
She has a round face, a small nose, two big eyes, a small mouth and two big ears. Her eyes look like grapes. Her hair is long and black. She is beautiful. She looks like a middle school student.
Lily is a good girl at school. In class, she listens to her teachers carefully. She studies English very well. She often helps us to solve problems. She is very quiet, sometimes she is very active. When class is over, she goes out of the classroom to play games with her classmates. She is very friendly to them. She is a good girl at home, too. After supper, she always helps her mother clean the room. Then she watches TV for a short time if mother permits.
She seems to have a special interest in music. Any time she hears the music, she will dance. Though she dances badly, she still loses herself in the music. I think she will be a dancer in the future. But she wants to be a writer.
This is my good friend. We feel happy when we are together. What about your good friend? Can you tell me something about your good friend?
Now we’re facing with a choice. whether to rent the school dormitory or not depends on different persons.
obviously, the school dormitory is cheaper. and i think as a university student i can afford it. but as each coin has two sides, the equipment isn’t very ideal. if i live in the school dormitory, i cannot occupy the whole toilet. that must be a terrible problem for a gift. what’s more? i have to go to bed on time and get up on time net morning.
On the other hand, renting a flat near school may solve all these problems ecept for the epense. it’ll cost me 800 rmb a month, and the price is considerably high for a no salary university student. but it’s really attractive to live with few people and have my own space.
As mentioned above, i’ve made up my decision to live near school and rent a flat. though the price is high, maybe i can find another girl also finding somewhere to live. and we can rent it together. thus reducing our epenses.
In the 21st century, human's science economic development has reached a very high level. But I want to ask: do you have any aware of human activities on the environment will be what kind of impact?
The deforestation of the forest is not a serious problem? According to the survey the world forest area is in at an annual rate of millions of hectares of disappear. Caused a lot of water and soil loss, make many areas become desert. Scope of human activities in the declining, it's not scary?
What human besides destroying forests, don't damage the environment problems? It is not. Now, we should see the seriousness of water pollution. At present, 60% of the country in the world face the shortage of water, 20% of the population is difficult to get clean water, 51% of the people do not have access to sanitary water. This is caused by what? Is, that we are causing ourselves now factories and sewage in our life, not by processing is out. This is not proof of that? According to research, each 1 cubic meter of sewage discharge, 14 cubic meters of natural water pollution. Think of it, this is what a terrible number?
In the discharge of smoke in the factory, we don't know the smoke is atmospheric pollution? Scientists have found that there are at least 100 species of air pollutants produced great harm to the environment, directly affect people's health.
Do we want to live in such an environment? Certainly don't want to; Then let us use action to prove it! We can start from me, start from now, start from the side. Love nature, the consciousness of environment protection! To do propaganda environmental protection angel! Let's take action to protect the environment
在21世纪的今天，人类的科学经济发展已经达到了很高的水平。然而我想问：你们有没有意识到人类的活动对环境会造成怎样的影响呢？
森林的'乱砍滥伐不就是一个严峻的问题吗？据调查全世界森林面积正以每年上千万公顷的速度在消失。造成大量的水土流失，使许多地区成为沙漠。人类的活动范围在不断减少，这不可怕吗？
人类除了破坏森林之外，难道就没有什么破坏环境的问题了吗？不是这样的。现在我们应该看到水污染的严重性，目前世界上60%的地区面临供水不足，已有20%的人口难以得到清洁水，51%的人无法得到卫生用水。这是什么造成的呢？是我们人类自己造成的，现在的工厂及我们生活中的污水，没有通过处理就排出去。这不是最好的证明吗？据研究，每排放1立方米污水，就污染14立方米天然水。想一想，这是多么可怕的数字？
在工厂排出的浓烟里，我们不知道浓烟是污染大气的吗？科学家发现，至少有100种大气污染物对环境产生极大危害，直接影响人们的健康。
难道我们想在这种环境中生活吗？当然不想；那让我们用行动来证明吧！我们可以从我做起，从现在做起，从身边做起。树立爱自然、爱护环境的意识吧！来做宣传环保的使者！让我们一起为保护环境行动起来吧
With the approachment of life in university, choosing a suitable dorm becomes a hot topic among the freshmen.
As far as I am concerned, renting a flat close to the university will be a smarter choice. Compared with school dorm, although the cost of 800 yuan per month is an extra load for the parents, it gives you more freedom as you live alone. Brave and independent as I am, I will be satisfied with this way of live. In addition, while the school dorm only provides one restroom on each floor, I can enjoy a comfortable bath in the flat. What comes last is that you will never bother anybody or be bothered by others. Since I am an early bird, I don’t want my reading in the morning to be a nightmare of my dormmates.
In conclusion, renting a flat is my best choice. Of course you can make your own decision, and it all depends.