无论是身处学校还是步入社会，大家总少不了接触作文吧，根据写作命题的特点，作文可以分为命题作文和非命题作文。那么问题来了，到底应如何写一篇优秀的作文呢？
I have a big and sweet family. My mother is a doctor in a big hospital. She is very hard-working and organized. She can always plan everything well. My father is a teacher 。 He teaches English in a middle school. He always makes his class interesting and lively. His students like him very much. My sister studies in senior school. She is pretty and clever. Her dream is to study in an university in Shanghai. I think her dream can come true in the near future. I’m a pupil in Primary School. I should study hard so that I can enter a good Middle School.
All of my family members are very happy now. I love my family very much.
This is my classroom. It is big. There is a lamp on the desk. It is lovely. There are some desks on the floor. They are pretty and pink. There is a piano on the floor. I’m good at playing the piano. There are computers on the floor. They are very cute. They are bright red. And we can play computer games. But we can’t shout or run. The wall is blue. They are many flowers on the shelf. I can eat ice-creams. They look good. I like my ideal classroom. Do you like my classroom? What about your ideal classroom?
My name is Liu Jiarui. I come from China. I am twelve years old. I am a student in Houji No.2 Junior High School. I am in Class Three,Grade Six. In my class, I have a good friend. His is a Chinese boy，too. His name is Yan Xuhao. His English name is Tom.
Yan Xuhao is a nice boy. He is twelve years old,too. He has a small nose and a small mouth. His eyes are big. His eras are small. He has short hair.
Look! Who is the cool boy over there? Right, He is my good friend, Yan Xuhao. He is in a red coat and black pants. His shoes are white and red. His cap is white, too. He looks very cute.
Yan Xuhao likes English very much. But his English is not very good. So I often help him with it. And he often helps me with my Chinese. We are good friends. We help with each other.
The Lantern Festival is coming soon, pleaseguess a riddle! "its coat is white and tender, its heart is colourful, itrolls on the white sand beach, it swims in the hotspring." Do you guess right?It is the round rice glue ball!
Every time in Lantern Festival, My mother will cook rice glue ballswith smile and put them into a bowl. And I, would like looking at the obedient littlesweet dumplings sliding together along the bowl wall, becoming a "littlesnow flower". I scooped up a cute little sweet dumpling with a spoon, lookedclosely at it, it was just like a white and soft pingpang! Mother was amused:"is this your toy?" Hey hey, I just liked watching!
I didn't rush to eat, with my mouth pouted, blew hot air for awhile, put a rice glue ball into my mouth, had a gently bite, suddenly slipped, delicious and sweet stuffingburst out, immediately, a strand very delicious warm current echoed in mouth. Isucked carefully , until the rice glue ball left only soft glutinous rice"coat", then swallowed it into my stomach with a "grunt" , Wow!The soft, sweet, warm feeling, let me quite comfortable!
How happy when eating sweet dumplings and feeling the warmth offamily reunion at the same time on 15th of the first month in lunar year!
不喜欢英语我不喜欢英语，一看到那眼花缭乱的字母我就想睡觉。
在英语课上，黑板上，老师不停地在黑板上写英语，我也努力的在记，可是我根本不懂老师在讲什么，一直叽哩叽哩的叫，我的脑都听晕了，什么东西啊！英语，我不理解的东西，为什么这么多人喜欢英语呢？只要你不出国，学了英语也没用啊！哎，没有办法，如果时光能快一点就好了。我爷爷呀想办法把我弄进外国语，可是英语实在是太难了，我又不感兴趣，再弄我还是进不去啊。
什么English啦！什么hai什么sorry会说就行了，何必那么大费力气呢？我真搞不懂大人的心里在想什么？英语啊英语，你为什么会这么厉害呢？你弱不行吗？英语让我想到如果能有一台机器只要把你要学的课本放在里面，戴上一个仪器，能把所有的知识输入到我自己的脑子里，那多好啊，我就不用费这么多的精神去背书了。
可是这想想是没用的，我太异想天开了，世界上还没有这种东西呢。英语让我烦恼，它不让我知道怎样才能学好它，有可能它就像个魔鬼在围绕我，有可能它是个故意戏弄别人的小可爱，不过英语真的令我厌恶，什么它会是另外的字体，ABC…… 英语让我讨厌，英语现在大人都学英语，为什么英语使这么多人震撼？每一次学校上完课回家，大多数的作业都是英语，在没有英语的时光特别快乐，有了英语我的小学生活开始忙碌，每次做英语作业，我几乎大部分都是错的，应该没有英语的基因吧。在外国人的眼中中文是另一种语言，我们来说英语是一种语言，不晓得外国人为什么会创造出英文这种字体，这么难，英语我不喜欢它，它让我考上不好的中学，英语是我不能与外国人沟通，对我来说，学一门外语真的很难。
我很悲哀，为什么别人学的这么好，而我总是学不起来了呢？同学们都学的这么好，家长和老师都表扬他们，而我只有不同的眼光。我的自尊心都没了，是我更不喜欢英语。我不喜欢英语……
Hello! My name is Tan Guoguang. I Study in Shiyan School. I have short hair ，big eyes， small nose and red mouth.My favourite day is Saturday and Sunday.Because I can play computer games.I like it very much.My favourite food is eggplant. It's tasty and sweet. But I don't like tofu.It's not tasty.Sometimes I go to my friend's home. My good friend is Li Haoran.He is tall and strong. He's very funny and active.My favourite teacher is Miss Xie.She has long hair .She's short and strong. She's very funny. But sometimes she is strict.We all like her.Usually I play football on the playground. Saturdays and Sundays are sweet for me !
英语老师，我爱您！
我们的英语老师，一头弯曲如海藻的金黄色卷发自然地披在脑后，一张白净的鹅蛋脸上长着一双有神的眼睛，高挺的鼻子下面是一张能说会道的嘴，正是这张能说会道的嘴，让每一节英语课都充满了欢声笑语。
英语老师上课很有意思。她经常带领着我们在课堂上玩游戏，并且每一次的游戏都是花样翻新，给我们意想不到的惊喜。有时，英语老师还冷不防地在班上弄出一点儿小轰动，逗得整个课堂上的气氛顿时活跃起来。顺便悄悄告诉你哟，我们班人人都会跳的流行舞曲——小苹果，不是音乐老师传授的，而是我们的开心果——英语老师亲自在班上为大家示范的，自那节课后，小苹果便在俺班流行了。怎么样，感到不可思议吧？
我敢说，英语老师的课，全班百分之八十的同学都喜欢。为什么呢？因为英语老师的课，活泼生动、不呆板。之前提到过，英语老师有一张能说会道的嘴，这张嘴装满了无穷无尽的故事、笑话。每一堂英语课，英语老师那张能说会道的嘴总能蹦出无数的故事吸引我们每个人的注意力，今天上关于学科的，英语老师便会给我们讲外国小朋友的学习生活；昨天上的关于万圣节的，英语老师便给我们讲了万圣节的有趣的故事；明天要上关于春节的，不用说，英语老师便会给我们讲春节的习俗了。每一节英语课，还总是少不了英语老师自创的笑话。有的是现场制造的，有的是事先英语老师备好了的，还有的是英语老师亲身经历改编而成的······
总之，英语课没有哪一节课是死气沉沉的，因为，英语老师循循善秀、生动幽默的语言总能让大家心境开阔，视野跟着走向另一个美好的世界······说实话，我打心眼儿里敬佩英语老师，英语老师的课真的教会我们许多课内学不到的知识、道理。在一望无际的蓝天下，我多么想对蓝天高呼:英语老师，我爱您！
钟凤莺
岳池县实验学校四五班
Hello, everyone, my name is xx. For the first time, I think you are not very familiar with me. So, I give you a brief introduction.
I am xx years old and live in a sweet family of four. My mother and father are both teachers. My sister is a good student and she is a senior in high school this year.
I am very fond of laughing and active, a cheerful and lively child. I love sports, especially the sphere. For example: football, basketball, badminton, table tennis.
The classmate of everyone, since we are in a class, you should communicate with each other in the study, in the life support and help each other, and my goal is in a few years, the college entrance examination examination in the excellent grades, win honor for our family. However, to achieve excellent results, we have to work hard, for this, I will persist. Friends, let us work together!
I have two lovely rabbits. Each of them has got a round head,round eyes,long ears, short legs and a small tail.
One is white, and the other is brown. They like to eat vegetables, and they like to eat the food on my hands. We are good friends. I love my rabbits.
Everybody has his favourite thing, so do I. My favourite thing is a clock. It looks like Mickey. I got it from my mother on my eleventh birthday last year.
It is the best birthday present of all. I love it not only because it is lovely but also because it helps me a lot. Every morning it wakes me up and tells me,"It's time to get up!" Thanks to its help, I am never late for school. It's my best friend.