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As a child, I am so luck. I don’t need toworry about food. I always have enough delicious food, live in a big house, andhave beautiful clothes to dress. I am so happy that I have no idea to treasureall these things.
I am a kind of particular about food. I often eat a littlefor one dish and the throw it away, because I have many choices.
I will be fullafter eating several dishes. But one day, I watch a piece of news on TV.
It isabout some Africa children who are suffering starvation. They are so poor.
Theyare not only having no food to eat but also having little water to drink. A bowlof rice is very rare for them.
Seeing their longing eyes, I feel guilty. I amregret about wasting food before.
How can I waste so much rare food? From nowon, I will try my best to save food, to do something for them.
作为一个孩子，我是如此的幸运。我不用担心食品的问题。我总是有充足的美味食物，住在大房子里面，穿着漂亮的衣服。
我是如此的幸福，所以我都没想过要珍惜这一切。我可以说得上是挑食的人。
我经常吃一样菜只吃一点点，然后就扔掉了，因为我有很多的选择。吃了几道菜后我就会饱了。但是有一天，我在电视上看到一个新闻。
那是关于正在遭受饥饿的非洲儿童。他们是如此的可怜。他们既没有食物也没有多少水可以喝。一碗白饭对他们是那么的弥足珍贵。看到他们那双渴望的眼睛，我感到很内疚。我很后悔一直在浪费食物。我怎么能浪费那么珍贵的食物呢？从现在开始，我会努力节约粮食，为他们尽一份力。
英文：
It was a rainy night in spring. I lied in bed sleepless, listening to the rain dropping down softly on the roof. It was just like the music. I was deeply moved by it. Rain in spring is not like rain in autumn or summer. It drizzles sometimes, moistening the thirsty fields lightly and selflessly.
I apparently feel the fresh breeze together with raindrops blowing against my window.
译文：
这是一个春天的'雨夜。我躺在床上，聆听着雨滴温柔地敲着房顶，像音乐一般。这样的雨夜我无法入睡，我被深深地感动了。春雨不像秋雨，也不像夏雨。它大多是毛毛细雨，轻柔而又无私地滋润着干涸的大地。
我分明感觉到清爽的微风夹杂着雨滴吹进了我的窗户。
When cellphone became popular many years ago, parents and school at firstbanned students to take cellphone into classroom, but now, even the small childhas owned a cellphone. The use of cellphone can't be banned. For students, theyget used to keeping cellphone at hand, but the overuse of it can be blamed totheir parents. Some parents don't set good examples for their children. Whenthey are together, they just leave cellphones to kids and let them kill thetime. If they show the beautiful scenery around and teach kids to appreciate theworld. Then cellphone won't take up their time.
How to promote college student’s creativity As we know,there are signs that college students are lack of creativity in China.This condition is caused by many reasons.Frist of all,in Chinese tradition”teaching by holding his hand”is the best way to develop skills,which makes students lose the ability of thinking deeply.Besides,solving problems with computers makes students very lazy,so much so that they lose the interest of creativity.What’s worse,quantities of students hold the view that creativity is useless.In my opinion,measures must be taken to promote college student’s creativity.There are many things that we can the one hand,the government should issue some polices which are good at the other hand,we should learn some useful experience from Western style,for example,paying more attention to originality and independence.What’s important is that we college students should set up the ideas that creativity create new world and we have potential to create new world.
In conclusion,only if we make concerted efforts we can own the sprirt of creativity.
This cherry tree grows in my house downstairs.
Cherry blossoms,that rare cherry upon a time,I have forgotten it again and again in my ，with that beautiful flower,it proved to me its existence,and proved its glorious moment in life You see,the clouds are as bright as the flowers,swaying on the branches,as if to see people shy.The sunlight in the petals,fell under light,just like seeing my beloved husband,red with pink with white,beautiful face seems like good old Diao Chan biyuexiuhua beauty,it was very beautiful.
Although cherry blossoms do not have the fragrance of roses,the elegance of jasmine,and the beauty of the daffodils.However,it has a temperament that others can not possess - humility,no matter how people praise it,it still silently dedicated a beautiful scene,no return dedication,only willing to live out of self.
At present,the cherry blossoms filled with trees slowly swayed in the sunlight,carrying the pink and pink,and offering a dazzling light in the beautiful spring!
It does not expect anything,only for survival and open,and this is the cherry blossoms
July was a very wonderful month for me. Because I had a chance to go to Singapore. It was the first time I went to a foreign country. So I had a special experience.
Like the old say, “There is no best in world, but there is better.” I knew it after I had been to Singapore.
Singapore is called “a Garden City”。 The weather is warm the whole year. You can walk under the bluish green sky with white clouds in it, and you will be intoxicated with the sweet flowers and green trees and grasses. When you are having meals, a number of little birds will fly to your plate and share food with you. Singapore is a home for both human and animals.
The students in Singapore are talented. They are zealous, polite, brave, united and healthy. In the process of making friends with them, we learnt a lot from each other, although we were from different countries and spoke different languages.
The most profound thing to me is that the students from Human High School are honest. I still remembered the one day that they had to write from memory. They didn’t look around though they sat next to each other. I think it was very good though it was a little thing.
This travel in Singapore made me know a lot. I will never forget it.
This question and another similar question， "Have you decided what you will do after you finish school?" were among the most common questions people often asked me when I was a small child and then a student in school. Choosing the right career is very important. For this reason we should try to find out what our talents and interests are and how we can use them. There are many careers open to each of us. Many persons find their place in government service， and many others may be interested in going into the business world. Teaching， newspaper works， medicine， engineering， science -- these and many other fields offer fascinating careers to persons with talent and training.
Topic(题目)：
A friend of yours has received some money andplans to use all of it either
to go on a vacation
to buy a car.
Your friend has asked you for advice. Compareyour friend’s two choices and explain which oneyou think your friend should choose. Usespecific reasons and details to support yourchoice.
Model Essay(范文)：
Trying to decide how to use your money is always tough. Should you use your money to buy acar or go on a vacation? Both afford lasting pleasure, but of a very different kind. From avacation you get the pleasure of doing wonderful things and of totally relaxing and enjoyingyourself. The memories you bring home with you can give you that same pleasure again everytime you think of them.
A car also gives you pleasure, every time you drive it. There’s the pleasure of not having todepend on public transportation. You can go places off the beaten track, where publictransportation doesn’t go. There is also the pleasure of being independent. You are able togo anywhere your car can take you, without depending on others.
A vacation gives you the opportunity to learn new things and meet new and interestingpeople. However, it’s only for a short period of time. A car gives you the same opportunities ona smaller level, but on a more regular basis. With a car, you can go someplace new everyweekend. You can also join a car pool. That way you can share travel expenses with the newpeople you meet.
Some people might say that spending your money on a vacation instead of on a car is beingimpractical. But nothing is as satisfying as a really good vacation. It’s mentally and physicallyhealthy. It gives you a chance to get away from all that is familiar to you and see the world froma new perspective. It lets you do nothing but play, the way you did when you were a child.Being able to play, even for a short period of time, is absolutely necessary for everyone’smental health. I would choose the vacation, because we all deserve to indulge ourselvessometime.
Our Librar is a busy place.It is open every day from8:00--12:00 in the morning and from 1:30--5:30 in the after-noon,except on Sundays.
The library contains a large variety of books. in it you will find both literary and scientific and technical books in Chinese and in foreign languages.In this building too,are reading-rooms with newspapers and magazines.Perhaps English books account for over a half of those in foreign lanuages.
We often go there to look for books which we want to borrow or to read articles which we like to consult.Our library provides all useful reading matter and reference materials according to our needs.Although we do not subscribe to any magazines or newspapers,we are well informed about the recent developments and new trends in the world as well as in our country.The library plays an important role in our college life.
我们的图书馆是一个繁忙的地方。是每天开放from8:00——12:00上午和下午1:30——5:30在中午以后，除了周日。
图书馆里有各种各样的书。在你将发现两个文学和科学技术书籍在中国和外国语言。这栋楼也，是阅览室报纸和杂志。也许英国人书帐户为一半以上的外国lanuages。
我们经常去那里看的书籍，我们想借或阅读文章，我们想请教。我们的图书馆提供所有有用的读物和参考材料根据我们的需要。虽然我们不订阅任何杂志或报纸，我们是消息灵通的最近的。事态发展和新趋势在世界以及我国。图书馆在我们的大学生活中扮演重要的角色。
It was almost Christmas and the little animals Christmas tree was decorated with beautiful stars and ribbons. They all hung their stockings over their beds, hoping that Santa Claus would come with a cart drawn by ten elk to give Christmas presents.
The little white rabbit is also lying in the warm bed in the home waiting for the coming of Christmas Eve, suddenly mother remembered to forget to buy the carrot and let the little white rabbit go to the supermarket to buy. The little white rabbit hopped to the supermarket. Suddenly she seemed to stumble over something, and she stopped to look carefully. It was a small black rabbit. "Are you all right? Are you cold? Why dont you come home? "I was driven out by my master because I was sick and could no longer work." Poor you. The little white rabbit took the only chocolate in his pocket to the hare and went to help his mother with the carrots.
In the evening, the small white rabbit family around the table to eat a big dinner. Then the little white rabbit suddenly thought of the poor little hare, and she put down the dishes and ran out quickly, and the whole family was shocked. When they saw that the little white rabbit had helped him to the house with a limping little hare, everyone applauded warmly. The family and the hare had an unforgettable Christmas.
Today is a good day for me! I'm very lucky to be a volunteer for Beijing Olympic. I worked hard to help the foreign children from all over the world.
I showed them the road to their hotel. I helped them to find what they are looking for. I helped them to know something about China and Chinese people.
The foreign children thanked me. They said my English was very good. I was very happy and smiled nice. I hope I can do more for Beijing Olympic. And I hope Beijing Olympic will be a great success.
Picture of an Angel
Golden sunlight danced in the treetops, and children's laughter filled the park. The smell of popcorn played on the breeze, and life seemed good. It was one of the happiest Saturday mornings I had spent with my little daughter, Gigi.
That is, until two strangers threw her into their car and sped away. It seemed like a bad dream. I could barely whisper when the police questioned me. For hours we waited, but there was no word on the whereabouts of the car. Tears would start to come. Then nothing. I was numb with fear.
"Go home, Ma'am," the sergeant said. "I'll have an officer drive you. We'll also want to monitor your telephone. The kidnappers might call, and we'll want to get a trace. Trust me, these guys can't get far." After what had just happened, it was hard for me to trust anything.
My friend Gloria came over that afternoon. "I heard about Gigi on the radio," she said. "Everyone is looking for the car. The interstates are all blocked." She took my hand.
"Look here," Gloria said. "I want you have this picture, and I want you to pray with me."
It was a picture of a little girl sound asleep in her bed. Standing by the bed was a tall, blond angel. His hand was touching the girl's shoulder as he smiled down at her.
My nerves were frazzled. "You know I don't believe in that kind of thing!" I snapped. "I'm too exhausted for any hocus-pocus right now, Gloria! I want my daughter home!" I started to shake, and then I began sobbing.
Gloria placed the photo on our mantle and knelt down beside me. "Just pray with me," she said, holding my hand.
I had no strength left, so we prayed and waited what seemed an eternity. Together, we waited by the phone until sundown. The phone never rang.
Suddenly, the front door swung open. I looked up and screamed.
There stood Gigi. "Gigi! Thank God!" I cried, throwing my arms around her. "Where did those men take you? How did you get home? Did the police find you?"
"No Mommy!" said Gigi. "I was real scared because those men said they were taking me far away. We were going real fast on an old rock road I'd never seen before. But then a tall man walked out in front of the car, and they ran off the road and hit a tree.
Then the tall man ran up and opened the car door and pulled me out. He was real nice, and said I would be okay now, and that those men couldn't hurt me. I must have gone to sleep, because then I woke up here in front of our house. He must have brought me home."
"But who … how did he know … where to bring you?" My voice broke and trailed to a whisper.
"I don't know, Mommy," Gigi said. "But he was real friendly, and I wasn't scared of him at all."
Just then Gigi noticed Gloria's picture on the mantle. "That's him!" She squealed, pointing at the picture. "Mommy, the tall blond man dressed like an angel. That's the man that pulled me out of the car!"
I felt chill-bumps across my neck and arms. Gloria turned pale. "Are you sure that's the man?" Gloria asked.
"Yeah, that's him okay. Except he didn't have wings, and he was wearing blue jeans and a tee shirt. But that's him exactly. I'd remember him anywhere!"
Later that night, the police found the injured kidnappers in their wrecked car fifty miles from our home. When questioned, the driver remembered swerving to avoid hitting a tall blond man. The backseat door that Gigi sat by had been completely torn off its hinges.
Twenty years have gone by. We have never heard from anyone claiming to have rescued Gigi. There have been no logical explanations for Gigi's miraculous escape and return home from a wreck so far away.
There have always been things that people can't explain. But, from that day forward, I've never doubted that many of those things are divine miracles. I believe that all experiences, positive and negative, are given to us for our strengthening and learning.
Gigi now takes her little girl to the park on Saturdays. They enjoy the sunlight as it dances in the treetops, the smell of popcorn, and the laughter of children. She keeps Gloria's picture on her mantle, and she re- members her angelic friend. And, like my daughter, I have a faith that has carried me through many trials since that day many years ago.
To build a conservation-oriented society is the new concept for our country. How to make it? I think to build a conservation-oriented society can from two sides. Firstly, saving energy would be the first thing. We need to save all resource that we use in our daily life. We need to change our habit of extravagance and waste. Secondly, we had better try our best to recycle something so that we can have more resource to use. For example, the water that we have used to wash vegetable can be used to wash toilet again. If we can do these, I believe building a conservation-oriented society is not a difficult thing.
建立节约型社会是是我国的新理念。如何做到呢？我觉得建立一个节约型社会可以从两方面着手。首先，节约能源是首要的。我们需要节约我们日常生活中所使用到的所有能源。我们要改变我们铺张浪费的习惯。其次，我们最好尽量循环利用，这样我们就可以有更多的资源了。例如，我们用来洗菜的水还可以用来冲厕所。如果我们能做到这些，我觉得建设节约型社会并不是一件难事。
最近学了几个英文应用，感觉生活丰富了。
其实每天学的不多。
那天看到一个带点讽刺意味的鸡汤，说我这种自鸣得意的“碎片”学习者一看就不开心，但又忍不住不同意。
每天学几个字，久而久之，一定会有进步。然后，这种零敲碎打的学习，每次只让我记住一个字。整篇文章还是很难看完，也没意识到进步了多少。
我还是听从了我的建议。我不只是记单词，而是听例子。一句话带动一句话，语境总是提升我。
我要改变自己碎片化的学习，多做系统的学习，投入和产出，不然进步真的很微妙。
找到正确的学习方法，事半功倍。
My English teacher has a big house.
It has a living room, a big dining room, two bedrooms, a study, two bathrooms and a big kitchen.
In the living room, there is a big picture, four brown sofas, white fans and blue walls. The TV set is big. There is a big Chinese knot on the wall. There are lanterns below the lights. I like them.
This is my English teacher’s house.
我的英语老师有一个大房子。
它有一个客厅，一个大餐厅，2个卧室，一个书房，2个浴室和一个大厨房。
在客厅里，有一个大画面，四个棕色的沙发，白色的风扇和蓝色的墙壁。电视机是大的。墙上有一个大的中国结。在灯下有灯笼。我喜欢他们。
这是我的英语老师的房子。
China Dining Custom Table Manners The main difference between Chinese and western eating habits is that unlike the West, where everyone has their own plate of food, in China the dishes are placed on the table and everybody shares. If you are being treated by a Chinese host, be prepared for a ton of food. Chinese are very proud of their culture of cuisine and will do their best to show their hospitality. And sometimes the Chinese host use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how yummy it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there.
Li Hua has improved a lot this term. In the past he didn’t do well in his subjects. He often quarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was always in a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hard at his lessons. He gets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parents and teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.
李华已经改善了很多这个词。在过去，他在他的科目中没有做得很好。他经常和他的同学吵架。垃圾被他在地上到处都是。他的书桌总是乱七八糟的。。自从老师和他交流后，他改变了很多。现在他努力学习功课。他和同学们相处得很好。他经常扫地。他的父母和老师都对他满意。我希望他能在即将到来的考试中取得好成绩。
Independence Day is a day of family celebrations with picomics and barbecues,showing a great deal of emphasis on the American tradition of political freedom.Activities associated with the day include watermelon or hotdog eating competitions and sporting events,such as baseball games,three-legged races,swimming activities and tug-of-war games.
Many people display the American flag outside their homes or buildings.Many communities arrange fireworks that are often accompanied by patriotic music.The most impressive fireworks are shown on television.Some employees use one or more of their vacation days to create a long weekend so that they can escape the heat at their favorite beach or vacation spot.
Independence Day is a patriotic holiday for celebrating the positive aspects of the United States.Many politicians appear at public events to show their support for the history,heritage and people of their country.Above all,people in the United States express and give thanks for the freedom and liberties fought by the first generation of many of today's Americans.The Statue of Liberty is a national monument that is associated with Independence Day.
The first description of how Independence Day would be celebrated was in a letter from John Adams to his wife Abigail on July 3,1776.He described "pomp and parade,with shows,games,sports,guns,bells,bonfires,and illuminations" throughout the United States.However,the term "Independence Day" was not used until 1791.
“I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America,and to the Republic for which it nation under God,indivisible,with liberty and justice for all.”
Happy birthday,America.
My dog
我的狗
I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?
【参考翻译】
我有一只狗。我的狗的名字叫嘟嘟。嘟嘟是9年。嘟嘟胖。它穿着一件白色外套。嘟嘟有两个大眼睛和两个小耳朵。它有一个短嘴。我的狗是聪明的。我喜欢我的狗。你喜欢吗？
英语是一门实践性和人文性都很强的学科，高中英语作文教学尝试。高中英语教学的目的是指导学生更好地进行语言实践，努力使基础知识转化为言语技能，并发展成为运用英语进行口头和笔头交际的能力。英语书面表达是对学生的组织和应用所学知识的能力的考查，也是检验学生学以致用的水平的主要形式。但是在平时的教学中，老师们常常抱怨相当一部份学生的作文中语误繁多，辞不达意，句式单一，甚至逻辑混乱。既使花了相当的时间和精力进行写作训练，大多数学生的写作水平仍是原地踏步，收效甚微。应该采取什么措施加以训练才能培养学生写出内容充实，用词贴切，行文流畅，既有丰富的达意功能和交流功能，又有一定的修辞手法的佳作呢？现将本人在教学中的几点尝试小结如下：
（一）在积累中领悟。古语说得好：“巧妇难为无米之炊”。因此，在进行书面表达训练之前，我特别强调学生注重语言知识的输入和积累。应该说，听、说、读、写四种技能是相辅相成，相得益彰的。听和读是理解和吸收语言知识的基本手段，只有做足做好这一方面的积累，才能保证好的输出能力。我主要从以下几个点入手：
（1）朗读训练。要求和督促学生以课文段落、所做过的阅读和完形中的优美篇章、新英语九百句、21世纪报中贴近学生学习和生活、社会发展、时代气息的时文为内容，每天保证15分钟的大声朗读，在朗读中领悟和理解语言的结构和功能，培养语感，加深对措辞和表达的感悟。
（2）听写训练。在日常的教学中，有意识地搜集优美实用的词、句、段落和语篇，利用课前3—5分钟进行听写，不仅能促进学生更准确地理解句子及篇章，熟练地书写句子，有效地锻炼学生的`书面表达能力，也为日后的写作积累了材料。
（3）摘录好词、好句和好的段落。在平时学习中多留意，多收集素材，力求每天至少记住1—2个好的词句，并尽可能地运用到写作中，这样写作时就可以做到胸有成竹，而不会手忙脚乱，无从下手。
（4）错题集锦。建议学生自备一本命名为 “HotPotatoes”（烫手的马铃薯）的小册子，用以整理和订正练习和考试中出现的错误，随身携带，并时不时地拿出来翻看和辩析，确保在今后少犯或不犯类似的错误。
（二）在训练中突破。提高学生的写作能力并非一朝一夕之功。在教学过程中，教师应自始至终抓好英语基础知识，结合学生的实际情况，突出学生主体，采取有序多样的训练方式来提高学生的遣词造句、谋篇布局的能力，提高实践能力和书面表达能力。
（1）严把书写关。整洁漂亮的书写会给人以美好的印象，也会在一定程度上提高了作文的档次。因此，即使在平时的作业中，我要求组长、科代表层层把关，对随意塗改、书写潦草的作业一律退回重做，力求人人做到卷面整洁，书写工整规范，并把这一观念渗透到平时的每一环节。
（2）常抓改写和缩写。高中英语新教材内容丰富，题材广泛，包容风土人情、历史地理、名人传记、新闻出版、环境保护、自然灾害等方方面面，高中英语写作《高中英语作文教学尝试》。在加强语篇教学的同时，应适时地让学生围绕课文内容进行写的练习，提供机会让他们运用相关的语言知识，是提高写作能力的重要环节；也可精选一些课外英文读物（如《二十一世纪报》）的部分篇章，要求学生进行缩写和改写，让他们在丰富的内容中学会把握要点，又有充分的选择和个性发挥余地。
（3）全真试题演练。认真搜集历年的高考卷、往届的期中和期末考的书面表达并整理归类，有意识地将原文的相关的词、短语和结构挖空，要求学生借助所给的提示完成文中的空白处，让他们在所创设的不同的语境中对错误率较高的动词时态和语态、关键词组和短语、恰当的连词和引导词、实用的句式结构等方面加以强化训练，提高他们在今后的写作中关注和把握好这几方面的意识。
（4）重新排序法。把文章的顺序打乱，然后要求学生按所提供的信息重新排序，使学生在训练中对上下文的衔接及篇章的构建有更加深入和到位的体会及升华；也使他们感受到为了使短文通顺、流畅、自然，不仅得重视篇章的行文逻辑，谋篇布局和连贯性，还必须采用恰当的词汇短语使句与句、段与段之间衔接紧密，过渡自然，使文章紧凑整和，言简意赅。
（5）限时现场作文训练。经过一段时间的积累和循序渐进的实践，定期地让学生进行现场作文的训练是很有必要的。训练中，我主要对文章的体裁作出统一的规定，并让学生自己提供10个左右的词组和短语，2—3个的句式结构，最后汇总在黑板上；然后让他们就这些词组、短语和结构进行口头造句训练，在确保大多数学生已掌握了这些词、句的用法的基础上，要学生门在规定的时间内完成书面表达。在训练的过程中，学生可利用所学的某些词汇、句型，借助已形成的思维定势，用英语表达思想，传递信息，不仅使学生觉得学到的英语知识有了用武之地，也极大地减轻了写作的心理压力，增强了写好文章的信心。
（三）在评改中提高。新课标明确指出在教学中应“以学生为中心，以活动为中心，以任务为中心，突出学生主体，倡导体验与参与，在体验、参与和合作中互相促进，共同进步”，因此在作文的评改我凸现学生的主体性，充分发动学生参与和体验，在做中学、体验中提高。
（1）吃透评分标准。学生只有在了解写作的评分标准之后，才有可能做到有所侧重，有的放矢，也才不会因某一方面的偏差而白白丢分。因此，在系统训练之前，我都认真地组织学生对评分标准进行学习和研究，确保学生领会评分标准的依据和要旨，以便在写作中避开不利因素，最大限度地减少无谓的失分。
（2）组织自评和组评。在以往的教学中，书面表达都是老师辛辛苦苦评改，而学生只关心得了几分，然后就置之不理了，因此效果总是不尽人意。现在我采用让学生自评和分组评改。比如在配套练习或测试中的书面表达，主要地是把范文印发给学生，人手一份，先明确要点；再点出关键词组短语；然后是文章的连贯性和结构的合理化，也就分数的比例进行一定的指导，最后让学生根据以上几个方面进行自评。在现场限时训练之后，以4人一组把学生分成几个小组，每个成员负责一部份，就动词的正确形式、短语词组的合理搭配、句式结构的准确性及关联词的恰当应用进行评判，分工明确，各司其职；最后再汇总，共同对这几篇短文打分，使学生在分工协作与亲身体验中有更深的印象，在评价别人的同时也达到自省和探究的效果，可谓一举多得。
（3）凸现优美的词句。应该说，在学生的作文中，我们能时不时发现一些优美的词句。因此在评改时，我都尽可能地把这些词句勾画出来，并不失时机地向学生推荐并用多媒体课件集中展示，使学生从中得到肯定、鼓励和推动，也激发他们去作出更多的尝试和创造。
（4）开辟习作欣赏角。经过一段时间的实践和练兵，适时地从学生的习作中选录一些篇章，刊登在习作欣赏角。作品的选录可从多个角度入手，既可以是书写漂亮的佳作以原卷张贴，也可以是进步明显的习作滕写之后张贴，还可以是学生推荐的名篇佳作，诗词歌曲，使学生在欣赏中学习，在学习中竞争，在竞争中提高。
（5）细化作文分数。作文的得分是对学生的劳动的肯定和评估，学生们对此也极为关注。如何充分利用这一有利因素来促动学生致力于书面表达的提高呢？经过一段时间的摸索，我做了细化作文分数的尝试。打分的时候，我把分数分解成内容分（15）+学以致用或优美词句分（３－５）+书写分（２—４），特别突出学以致用分和书写分，在平时的点点滴滴有意识地进行渗透和倡导，使他们在训练中有明确的导向和目标，达到事半功倍之效。
总而言之，提高书面表达的能力不可能是一蹴而就的。只有在明析了评分标准的前提下，经过不懈的积累，掌握一定的写作技巧，通过行之有效的写作实践及不断的归纳和总结来提高学生的谴词造句和谋篇布局的能力，才有可能使他们的写作能力得到质的飞跃。
A few days ago,the teacher taught the text of "the voice of a Chinese child"。After I saw it,I could not be calm for a long time.
This text mainly describes the heros father is a military observer of the United Nations in the implementation and maintenance of the peace act of heroic sacrifice,he called on the world to peace not war story.
In recent years,world wars have been continuous,such as the United States and Afghanistan.Islam.The war between the United States and Iraq,the war between Israel and Palestine,and so on.A few people are almost family,broken up,visible,the war damage to human or great.A bomb fell on the busy street,and the city immediately became a pile of ruins.
Fifty-one years ago,the people of the world won the victory against fascism with blood and life,but the God of peace did not live forever.Many areas are still filled with the smoke of the war,and the evil bullets also threaten the delicate flowers of peace.Save the children,want peace not war,not to the mother in the lost son,wife to not lose her husband,the children do not lose in the father,the world should act together,the sea land,are in the hand of friendship,a laugh,devoid of old resentment.I hope that there is no roar of the looters,no roar of the rebels,and peace everywhere.Sunshine.Flowers and love.
为了增强我们学习英语的兴趣，3月25日下午，班主任杨老师组织大家到四楼多媒体教室上了一堂英语课。
同学们选好座位，然后大家就目不转睛的盯着大屏幕。只见大屏幕在音乐的伴奏下不停地显示着校园的歌曲，还有一些在校园里的注意事项。屏幕上有好多房子也随着音乐的变化也悄悄地移动，真有趣！随后，我们听了三首英语歌曲，虽然英语歌我听不懂，但只要坚持，我想我们会慢慢提高我们的英语水平的。
I have a lot of little handiwork,but the favorite one is my collecting-tin.It is a little man made of china.He wears a red hat and a pair of big glasses.His blue clothes are very nice.He has a red noseband no big eyes like stars on his face.His big and round body is very funny.Because of this collecting-fin,I have learned how to savemoney,When I was a little boy,I always put coins away,then I dropped them into his round bOdy.Sometimes he can "eat" plenty of coins at a time,He becomes heavier and heavier day after day.
Dear sister,
How are you? Do you konw who I am? I miss you very much. I went to your new house for many times.That was very fun.
Firsely,let`s talk about study. A few days later,I will have an examintion. But Idon`t nervous.Beacuse at the summer I`ll learn swim.I hope this summer will come soon. I have confience. What about you?
Secondly,let`s talk about daily life. Where do you live? I think there is beautiful. Is it true? Qingdao changed a lot. The car can find everywhere. Now it`s dark. And you?
Last weeked, I went to the bookshop. I like reaiding books very much. Such as Cartoon books, literature books. What do you do at last weeked?
The next year, we will be together. We will have a good time at that time!
Write soon.
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Jassica