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Hi!I am Zhang Luyan.I am thirteen years old.I go to PeijieMiddle School in Tianjin,China.This is my school day.
I get up at six o’clock.I go to school at seven o’clock and I go to school by car.I always eat breakfast on the car.
Lessons start in the moring at half past seven.We have five lessons in the morning.At twenty to ten we have a break.We go to the playground and do exercise or running.
Our lessons over at fifteen to twelve and we have lunch.We have a midday rest at twelve forty.At one forty the midday rest is over.
The lessons start in the afternoon at two o’clock.We have four lessons in the afternoon.At twenty to four we also have a break and I talk to my friend.I often go to the playground with them.
I go to home at six o’clock.I eat supper at seven o’clock.I do my homework at half past seven.I go to bed at twelve o’clock.
I am twelve years old.I am in seventh grade.I have eight? lessons every day---four in the moringand the other four in the afternoon.We learn ChineseMathsEnglish and other subjects.The first class begins at 7:20and end at 4:30 in the afternoon.
And I have lunch at school with my friends.I learn a lot from my teachers every day.I found my school day is wonderful.I have a good time in school every day.
Every morning I go to school by bike. I have 7 lessons a day. I learn seven subjects, such as English, Chinese, Maths,Geography，History, Physical Education and so on. All the teachers in our school work very hard. They do their best to help us with our studies. We are busy having lessons in the morning.At noon, we can borrow different kinds of books from the library. Sometimes we are allowed to step into the E-reading room. We can surf the net for some useful information. During the PE lesson, many boys like to play ball games while we girls like to play badminton or to practise dancing in the gym.
My school life is busy but interesting.
Every dayI go to school at seven.I have eight lessons every day.From seven twenty to seven fortywe always read English or Chinese.We begin lessons at seven fifty.A lesson has forty minutes.At eleven twenty in the noonwe have already finished our lessons in the morningand we will go to have lunch that time.
We can read newspapersdo our homework and play on the playground from twelve ten to twelve forty.And at twelve fiftywe will begin the lessons in the afternoon.We go home at four five in the afternoon.Then I will do my homework.This is my school day.
It was a beautiful Sunday. Our teacher told us that there would be an English corner after class. I set off soon after the last class in the afternoon.
To my joy, the English corner had just been on for a few minutes. I joined them in their talk. At first, I was afraid that my English was so poor and limited that I couldn't follow them or make myself understood. I was also afraid that someone might laugh at me. But a smiling face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. I became bolder and came to speak English with them freely.
The day was unforgettable. I learned a lot of knowledge and made a lot of friends. Through practice, we all improved our English. Though we spoke only in simple English, we all believe that tomorrow we will make greater progress.
I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After a quick breakfast, I go to school in my mothers car. It takes us more than half an hour to get there.
We have four hour classes in the morning. I have luch at my grandparents, because their home is nearer to my school.
After two classes in the afternoon, school is over. Then we clean our classroom.
I get home at about half past five. We have dinner at seven. After dinner I do my homework. If I finish my homesork early, I can watch TV for half an hour. I go to bed at half past nine or ten.
My school life is only a word, that is sad. My school life tasteless as dough -- at school, every day living in 3 points 3 lines (dorm, classroom and dining hall), 70% of the time was occupied by the classroom. Every day we face the teacher in charge that gloomy face, not only that, we also face the Gao Rushan homework, it bring us pressure on the bottom, holding up a monkey, like five lines of mountain where our "tang's monk"? Some teachers full hazelnut, unexpectedly occupied our, I like gym class. There was a teacher on the eight lessons a day (two classes). The teacher how afraid tired now? Every day like a fugitive from the teacher that scary vision, live a life of proprietor. Elementary school that a sweet and happy life to disappeared, odorless, bitter life only.
My school life like dough colorless - on the junior high school, more back the burden of heavy, the footprints on the road more and more deep, the teacher said, 2 is particularly important, we must work hard to try again, I know, but you also can't deprive us of art, music, can't hear old color, see a wonderful song before, it's not! Teacher said an eloquent, learn to mix a, good, "law" is a class, the so-called "escape" is to review the lessons, reading a book. School life should be colorful, but where our spring! My school life like dough deformation, school life is unpredictable, god, this may be a class praised by the teacher, the class teacher is "please" to the office. As long as you make a little affectations, under the nose of the teacher, the teacher will have n kind of speculation, until when it comes to your face. A small mistake the teacher will take you to a lot of "big" : in the future, don't study hard, only farming oh...
In my life the dictionary, sweet happy... Just bitter, sad......
Hello！I’m a student of Yunyang Middle School.I often get up at six o’clock.About twenty minutes later, I have my breakfast. We begin our clsaaes at 8:00 a.m. We have four lessons in the morning. They’re English, Maths, PE and Chinese. Then we have lunch and chat with each other. In the afternoon we only have three lessons, they’re Art, Music and Computer lessons. After school,I can go home and do my homework. At about ten o’clock, I must go to bed.
When I go to school in the first day, my parents drive me to school, then they walk me to the classroom, they tell me that they will go away and I feel lonely, I try not to cry, though I want to cry in my heart.
But soon I make new friends and forget about the unhappiness, we play together and become good friends.