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《刷子李》是人教版小学五年级下册第七组课文中的第二篇课文,选自冯骥才的《俗世奇人》。这是一篇略读课文,课文以“刷子李”高超的技艺为话题,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领,大智慧。本文生动有趣,故事一波三折,人物形象富有传奇色彩,是一篇艺术性和趣味性都较强的文章,很容易吸引学生阅读。
我在教学中紧紧抓住孩子们的心,从而学习作者描写人物的方法呢?课中紧紧抓住一个“奇”字,让学生在“读”中晓“奇”,在“议”中悟“奇”,从种种“奇”中感悟刷子李的技艺高超。如,在引导学生感悟“刷子李”是一“奇”人时,引导学生从以下方面品味——“规矩奇”、“ 动作奇”、“效果奇”各体现在哪些方面?
我把本课教学定为两大板块:聚焦文本内容,从细节描写中感知“技艺高超”;聚焦表达形式,在揣摩曹小三内心活动中感知“一波三折”。我始终考虑学生的需要,立足于学生的发展,对教学内容进行了调整和取舍,重点突出,条理清晰,学生学得兴趣盎然。这些收获,使我意识到:心里有文本,眼里有学生。这样的教学设计应该是可行的、有效的。
《刷子李》是一片略读课文,总体来说,上这篇文章的思路还是很清晰的,我主要从两个问题切入,引导学生进行自读自悟,分别是:这个人为什么叫刷子李?他奇在哪?
透过竺老师的点评,有以下几点思考。我受启发最大的是小练笔部分。原先自己设想的是让学生练笔说一说曹小三在听完师父的话后表达决心,但是这样的练笔设计得有些浅,所以修改后的教案,我将练笔部分分成两个,一个是练说,说一说能够分我两个部分,一是练说部分,练说部分能够问:同学们,此时此刻,应对这样一位身怀绝技的二师父,曹小三想说什么?他会怎样向父亲表态呢?
二是练笔部分练说说决心,练笔结合课文最后一句,先齐读,最后让他们写写自己明白了什么,这样不仅仅提升了文章的高度,也能让孩子从文中受到一些道理的启示和启发。为了这个练笔,能够在分析课文的时候就将一些感悟渗透到文本的理解和分析上。如刷子李刷的规矩齐,师能够问:为什么要定下这样一个奇特的规矩(因为太累,多了,肯定受不了,不贪多,保证质量最重要。)又如在理解匀匀实实部分,师能够问:为什么能刷得那么严严实实?引导学生说出轻重均匀,速度快,蘸得不多不少,为什么能够做到呢,主要是平时的刻苦练习和研磨,让学生认识到平时积累的重要性。
另外,要更加重视朗读方面的训练,仍要重视抓住关键词的方法多加指导,要更加重视,个性要抓住关键字进行朗读的训练;还要重视评价,用不同的、准确的评价性语言来研究学生的回答,这也是自己以后需要努力的。
学生对课后三个问题的精彩交流,也是超乎我的预想的。尤其是第二处问题(第一课时:为什么凡卡给爷爷写信乞求爷爷带他回家?第二课时:多数同学认为凡卡受尽折磨、苦不堪言,生不如死,但是有一个同学却认为凡卡很坚强,你认为凡卡到底有没有坚强?)的交流,具有“史无前例”的突破!多数孩子一开始都认为凡卡的学徒生活“再也受不住了!”“我就要死了!”“只有死路一条了!”“没有指望了,连狗都不如!”……只看到凡卡悲惨遭遇的一面,却没有发现凡卡骨子里还隐藏着坚强的另一面!不少人在可怜凡卡的同时,唾骂的是鞋店的老板、老板娘、几个伙计,怪罪的是黑暗深重的资本主义社会。这课的教学,我没有引导学生去同情凡卡,也没有引导学生去唾骂和怪罪,学生的交流中已经蕴含这些了,我为何还要再去强化这些呢!因为这些都不能触动我和学生的心弦,不能撞击我和学生的心灵!
凡卡在如此险恶的环境中,始终保持着对自由幸福生活的向往,始终坚信能够回到爷爷身边;在经受折磨和屈辱之后,凡卡顽强地挺过来了;虽然凡卡的忍受力达到了极限,甚至想到了死,但是他最终还是选择了生存,他没有自暴自弃!这就是凡卡的坚强!这就是震撼人心的坚强!我和学生被凡卡的坚强感动着,不断地感动着……
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细细咀嚼课堂细节,静静聆听教研员教诲,默默享受语文的每一份情怀。在今天上完《刷子李》这篇课文后,我反思如下:
《刷子李》是一篇略读课文,课文以“刷子李”的高超手艺为话题。既为奇人,则轶事多多,但作者只选择一件小事来写,借一件极富戏剧性的小事窥见人物的大本领、大智慧……所以我以一个“奇”字,“奇”在何处?引导学生进入文本,潜心涵咏。抓好重点词句是学习这篇课文最好的方法,因为课堂内容来自语言,课堂操作落实语言,课堂细节敲打语言。因此我抓住直接描写“刷子李”刷墙的重点句段的情景,组织学生一句一句地读,边读边想象情景,来体会“刷子李”神奇。之后,我又引导学生凭借对曹小三内心世界的揣摩,凭借对小说布局谋篇的初步认识,体会“一波三折”的写作手法。学生在老师的带领下思路敏捷,完成学习任务也就干脆多了。
课堂是一门缺憾的艺术,这节课也不例外。聆听了教研员的评后,收获颇多:
1、在课堂上语言赏析还不够,比如:句子“他要是给您刷好一间屋子,屋里什么都不用放,单坐着,就如同升天一般美。”在学生理解完这句话体现了刷子李的技艺高超后,应再引导学生想想这句话用了什么修辞手法,学生不难答出是“夸张”。还有几句,也应引导学生自己去体会用了什么修辞手法。这说明我钻研教材还不够深入,以后上课前应该反复研读教材。
2、没有充分发挥学生的主体作用,老师讲得多,没有完全放手给学生。这是一篇略读课文,“刷子李的奇表现在哪些方面”“作者是采用什么样的方法来描绘刷子李的奇的?”等一系列问题的提出,可以充分让学生通过讨论、合作、交流共同完成学习任务。既能锻炼了学生的思维能力、语言表达能力、分析问题和解决问题的能力,同时,学生的思想觉悟也得到了很大的提高。但我在这方面做得还不够,总包办的太多,这是我今后要注意的一点。
执教《刷子李》,有亮点,有败笔。再次感谢教研员的肯定和批评,感谢你们给了我参照系,给了我反思力。我将以此为契机,不断努力完善自己,精心备好每一堂课,上好每一堂课,做好每一次教学反思。
课文《刷子李》语言朴素,具有浓郁的“天津”风味,并且幽默传神,极富表现力,无论是人物语言,还是叙述语言,均情趣盎然,简洁传神。本文细节描写对于塑造人物个性起到了重要作用。作者在塑造主人公形象的时候,就注重了细节描写。这是课文在写法上的一个显著的特点。文中“刷子李”的黑衣黑裤,刷墙时娴熟的动作,还有那个让人吃了一惊的白点等细节描写都使“刷子李”这个人物活了,神了。为了烘托人物的形象,文中也采用了对比的手法:“刷子李”大胆的“承诺”,充满自信,豪气千丈,同时又心细如发,对于小徒弟细微的内心活动体察入微。而曹小三开始听说师傅有手绝活时,“半信半疑”;师傅刷墙时,“最关心的还是身上到底有没有白点”;看见师傅身上出现白点时,以为师傅“名气有诈”。这样把曹小三对师傅“半信半疑”的态度和主人公“艺高胆大”的自信进行对比,充分表达了作者对“刷子李”这个具有超凡技艺的“奇人”由衷的赞叹和肯定。
本文教学的重点之一是“刷子李”的技艺高超在哪里。教学的时候先放手让学生自由读,自由划有关句子,然后再交流。
生1:我从第6自然段“每一面墙刷完,他搜索一遍,居然连一个芝麻大小的`粉点也没发现”中“每一面”看出墙有好几面的,曹小三不放过任何一面寻找落下的白点,都没有。
看到学生拎出了这一句重点句,我就顺势让大家都先看这一句,并提出要求:还能从中读到什么?
生2:我从“搜索”看出他是很仔细地找,不是随意地看一下,他仔细寻找,也找不出芝麻大小的粉点,芝麻是很小的,几乎看不到的,可还是找不到,说明刷子李的技艺实在是高超。
生3:我还从“一个”、“也没发现”看出真的没有粉点,看出技艺高超。
没有划出来的学生也根据起立学生的指点,划出了句子的重点句子,接着先让学生自己试着读一读,然后请学生起来读,发现有的学生突出“一个”朗读,有的学生突出“芝麻大小”朗读,但效果都不错,最后全班运用这两种不同的读法齐读,让朗读更加有滋有味。
在教学“只见师傅的手臂悠然摆来,悠然摆去,如同伴着鼓点,和着琴音”时,学生说:“他不觉得刷墙是苦力活,他把这活当作一项艺术的创作。”
我马上表扬了她很会用词,接下来的手举得更多了,有的说:“他刷墙摆来摆去,很有节奏。”有的说:“本来刷子打到墙上声音很难听的,但在他那‘啪啪’声很清脆,很动听。”有的说:“粉刷的颜色特别白,特别亮,特别干净,而且他刷两条下来不会重复,也不会有缝隙空开,太了不起了。”
今天的课堂气氛浓厚,学生说得津津有味,文章描写的情景虽然离学生的生活实际较远,但语言幽默风趣、简单易懂,令学生喜欢,学生也就很容易抓住字词咀嚼其中的韵味,让学更加有趣,让学生更加快乐。
课文《刷子李》语言朴素,具有浓郁的“天津”风味,并且幽默传神,极富表现力,无论是人物语言,还是叙述语言,均情趣盎然,简洁传神。本文细节描写对于塑造人物个性起到了重要作用。作者在塑造主人公形象的时候,就注重了细节描写。这是课文在写法上的一个显著的特点。文中“刷子李”的黑衣黑裤,刷墙时娴熟的动作,还有那个让人吃了一惊的白点等细节描写都使“刷子李”这个人物活了,神了。为了烘托人物的形象,文中也采用了对比的手法:“刷子李”大胆的“承诺”,充满自信,豪气千丈,同时又心细如发,对于小徒弟细微的内心活动体察入微。而曹小三开始听说师傅有手绝活时,“半信半疑”;师傅刷墙时,“最关心的还是身上到底有没有白点”;看见师傅身上出现白点时,以为师傅“名气有诈”。这样把曹小三对师傅“半信半疑”的态度和主人公“艺高胆大”的自信进行对比,充分表达了作者对“刷子李”这个具有超凡技艺的“奇人”由衷的赞叹。
本文教学的重点之一是“刷子李”的技艺高超在哪里。教学的时候先放手让学生自由读,自由划有关句子,然后再交流。
生1:我从第6自然段“每一面墙刷完,他搜索一遍,居然连一个芝麻大小的粉点也没发现”中“每一面”看出墙有好几面的,曹小三不放过任何一面寻找落下的白点,都没有。